Really good. Please do another one. It will most likely to bet that PB kills FP. Just do the next one!

Hey,

Pretty awesome story so far, please keep up the good work! I like your cliffhangers, you are a quite good writer.

What the fuck man it's a ah some story but you should have kept on

It is a very good story please go on with it!

Keep going

Awesome but if FP dies could u make finn kill both of them

These are okay, but other than working on making them longer, you should try adding more detail like everyone's reactions at most every moment. Also I think that the banishment thing and most of PBs reactions were a little too out of character, she IS a princess personally I feel she'd have more control than that. But hey it's your fanfic.

interesting

When r u gonna hurry up and make a new one gosh

Princess bubblebut will ruin the moment

i like it i just love PB jealousy

hmm... let me guess. PB will call, but finn comes to the rescue. but FP finds out PB called & they try to beat the glob out of eachother. am i right? or do u have somethin' else happenin'? but i LOVE the way this story's goin'!

I think that she'l go and do it

Im liking this, please update fast!

Chapter 1: Finn, Congratulations! Your no longer innocent! w