Um... it was... ok.

Fabian's dad is her uncle, not her cousin.
Just wanted to say that but I love the story, it's great

wtf that faggot neville should go die

why is snape always the one performing unbreakable vows? im just sayin he sure does seem to do it alot...

I love this so much. I like the OC already and how you made Sirius the secret keeper instead of that rat. I hope the Potter's survive, at least long enough for Harry to have some good memories of them. Overall, Rose doesn't seem like a Mary Sue and neither does her mom. Great job!

Oh boy. I've been trying to find a lengthy and intriguingly prenised story such as this for a long time. I must say in advance that I'm not very good at leaving reviews theough the story. I tend to read all at once, and then review at the end. Here goes nothing!

I haven’t even read the first chapter yet, but I have looked for a book like this for ages. You English is great

The story is awesome and I loved it.
I know I'm a bit late but I just wanted to congratulate you for such a beautiful story.

I loved this story! If anyone is on the fence about reading this, you should absolutely give this a read! Aside from a few grammatical errors, which is totally fine since this author's native language is not English, it is by far one of the best Harry/OC stories I've read in a long time. Do yourself a favour and read this story and get sucker punched right in the feels like I did.

am i the only one that notices that every time the author uses "safe" it's spelled "save" and "live" is spelled "life".

She's being really selfish in my opinion. LOVE the story so far by the way!

I'm only on the third chapter so I don't know how the rest of this reads yet but, might I suggest re-reading your chapters before you post them as well as maybe going through the books again if you're unsure how to spell the name of something or someone? I don't know if you're active anymore as this was finished in 2015 but if you are maybe cleaning up the chapters a bit would be nice. It would help it read more smoothly. I'm sorry if this comes of as snobby I didn't mean it that way and I realize that English isn't your first language so apologize if I seem rude. It wasn't my intent.

Yeah it's not called the Avada Kedavra curse that is actually what you say to cast the curse. The curse is either called the killing curse.

You spelt mcgonagall name wrong. Also you've wrote twice why she's calling her daughter rose when really you should have just said it once. Also there are a few grammar mistakes like you wrote "girl which was sobbing a little" but this is incorrect as it actually should say "who was"

Sorry, I just have to clean the screen of my phone, its so wet! You have no idea I was properly blubbing as I read the first part, its just so beautifully sad, it makes you think about life and death, and if there is really any difference between them.