Wow, for the first time i really feel sorry for Monica. I didn't really like her as a character at first so i didn't pay much attention to her, but this is a great second part to your Zenon Eyes stories! Only one more to go!

This is a fantastic fanfic. I agree about the loose ends, and I like this explanation of what happened to Joe (I hate to think of him ending up in a scrap pile!). Monica's reactions to Joe as so well written. I found myself getting slightly nervous when Joe comes to the door. The whole story is thick with emotion and you really brought out the characters well. I like that you took the time to concentrate on the little things, like past arguments Monica and Henry have had, and Monica's E-Mail address.

I'm not sure if I agree with the idea of Joe bing sarcastic, but perhaps that was just Monica's interpretaion?

Warm wishes to you,

~Nyx

your story was ok...

how did you get this from chatbot? i mean, really, whenever i talk to it its all "who are u?

try watching A.

6000xs like i have, then write it as if you were a a mecha kid.4 example,

"I, Chris, am a clone of david. i did not want to be destroyed, so i run away from home," or something lkie that. just a suggestion.

writeforlife

emailme.

A very nice story this is one of the first stories I read when I discovered fanfiction,and it helped introduce me to the fascinating world of A. Intelligence sounds like a very realistic idea of what could happen if Joe and Monica were to meet.

Love it! A side of the common place household stay at home mom I'd love to see.

Wow! Even better than the first story! I love what you've done with Monica... would you consider collaborating with me on a story, if I ask really nicely? :D

wow this is great!