Great story

I love this story and the way your write Derek and Emily. Cheers!

This is a truly amazing story. It is very well written and you had a wonderful plot. It was like I was actually reading an episode of Criminal Minds. You did an amazing job.

I just love this story! The way you weaved the past and present was beautifully done. I love her relationship with her old team, and you captured the voice of all the characters perfectly. Thank you for sharing!

I started reading this story this morning and could not stop. Two hour later I had finished it and all I wanted to do was read more! I LOVE this story! The mixture of present and past time makes the story amazing. The humour you manage to add just makes it even better. I adore Tom, Dean and Nick, specially Nick after the last chapter. One of my favourite parts of the story is when all the guys says goodbye to Emily... And when Emily tells Derek the pasta is boiling over, it was hilarious! As soon as you post the sequel I will stop whatever I am doing and start reading it. Keep on writing because your doing an amazing job!

Oh my gosh! What a great story! Really, really, realllyyyy great I mean, I loved it! You write so well, and you made it all so believable, and you made me love the CIA team Emily has, which is a feat, since I saw so little of them.

Anyway. Great work.

super! loved both stories! kinda like ems old team too they seem like cool guys! maybe you could write another story with them in! please?
Loved it!
xx :)

This final chapter it perfect! This story is one of my very favourites! I'm so glad you wrote it and shared it with us, thank you!

This was a good story. Short and to the point. Although I tend to like longer, meatier stories, this one didn't waste any time with the setup and didn't shy away from the subject matter (I hate stories that setup a torture scenario then find all manner of ways to avoid violence). A good pace.

I do wonder, though, why you chose to illuminate that part of Emily's past and introduce her old team... unless you plan to write more stories featuring the trio that tie into her CIA etc history? The Russian storyline just seemed a bit...superfluous to me.

There was one problem throughout the story. You changed tenses quite often, from past to present and back. The entire story should be in the same tense.

All in all, I enjoyed it. Overall well written, good pacing, decent plot (though a bit unoriginal in this fandom and simple; I did appreciate you taking the time to address the fallout of her experiences, which most stories ignore), and a focus on my favourite character, which is always a huge plus. I look forward to reading your future work.

Regards,

sbz

Very good! Loved the last chapter

That was a great story... Live the amount of detail and the amount of emotion you covered

Nick was brave making that move on Emily in front of Derek... Lol

Are you planning a sequel or another story? Hope you are... Great job!

Good last chapter to end this. Your story was emotional, exciting, terrifying (in a good way) and always a good read. Thank you for sharing, I hope to read more from you in the future.

You were very welcome, my dear. I was happy to help. I freaking love Nick at the end, I'd love to see more of him, and more of him being naughty with the BAU team around. This was amazing for your first story, and I'm excited to read more.

Great story, I am so glad you finished it! One of my all time favorites. I loved how you mixed her CIA past with her FBI present, made her strong and yet showed her vulnerable side. Excellent writing. Thank you!

Great ending! I loved that her old team made a reappearence! Please contact me if you plan on writing anymore stories with Deaa, Nick, and Tom in them!