Im sorry but ron being sent away for vheating on homework? That is ridiculous, he doesn't deserve it. Hell he doesnt deserve expulsion. Skeeter is the character at fault not him. Im sorry but this thing with ron has ruined the story for me and it was going so well...
Very disappointed..

Aww i do hope you continue this great story :(

Please continue

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Great story Please add another chapter *puppy eyes* anyway cookies (::)(::)(::)(::)(::)(::)(::)(::)(::)(::)(::) one for each chapter Also I love Severus Snape and he is mine

great story but isn't ron's punishment a little too extreme? i mean to get shunned, expelled and practically disowned just cos he got someone to do his homework for him is kinda unrealistic.

I think the last chapter was more realistic along with the calming in this chapter. Please continue!

I have the same name as the pup now... I feel honored almost!

it wasn't a cockroach rita was a dungbeetle

awsome bugger no prison time but hope rons still expelled from hogwarts

Has anybody thought that this chapter could be a dream caused by Ronald's guilty conscience?

This chapter is incredibly OOC it's not funny. And while I appreciate Ron bashing because Ron's a dick, the ending of the chapter is ludicrous. Everyone is punishing Ron harshly for some things that were out of his control and for his general laziness. The punishment is too severe and takes away from this being a good and respectable piece of writing.

awsome sucked in ron can't wait to see how everything plays out no rons gone

I didn't really like this chapter, the characters were a bit over the top, the writing seemed a bit childish. The punishment was also over done. Hagrid got a lot worse punishment when he was in school and the headmaster though he had set the snake to kill a girl. He didn't go to prison. Don't let this review disheartened you, the more you write the better you become.

do you not think, that they are completely over reacting a little in accusing Ron of attempted murder? She wasn't forced at wand point, she was asked and she said yes. She knew it was dangerous, and she had enough about her to refuse. If it was actually that dangerous, then surely it should have been done under supervision of the teacher? I think this is a very weak argument for getting Ron into the bad books, it certainly should be attempted murder. Perhaps, given she agreed, she should be done for attempted suicide? Or perhaps Snape should be done for attempted murder for allowing or expecting students to do a dangerous potion without supervision?