That's a nice ending, tying up the entire story. I ended up shedding a large amount of tears between chapters. Rin and Sesshomaru's musings and thoughts are so on point and in character. Thank you for writing and finishing this story.

I'm trying to stop my tears from falling. I have read so many fics of Rin and Sesshomaru and encountered so many scenes between them. But yours is the first where he openly asked her to stop any and all feelings that she harbours toward him, im such a cold manner.
What if this is what it took between the two of them. Figthing the feelings actively for so long. Denying each other what they want. It's such a good angst.

You're a very terrific writer, and this story was very well done and had amazing detail and the plot line was truly great, you should really write more about this adorable couple you have a real gift for bringing out this pairings unique chemistry and you make it absolutely flawless.

Well here's to seeing more stories about this couple and possibly other's from this awesome Anime, TTFN.

Really enjoy this. Glad that it was finished

Ok I was not sure I was gonna like the whole Rin’s a kid deal b/c I want them to fall in love ...but I really like this chapter and i can’t wait to read the next one ( bravo )

That was a pretty good story. I agree with some other reviews that it was probably a realistic version of how Sesshomaru and Rin might have ended up together.

This was a nicely written story! Well done!...at times it lagged a bit for me because there wasn't much Sesshomaru for me. Lol and i hated your oc Rin's other potential partner...I felt that Rin wasn't really truly in love with Maru...he proved he did. One thing is to question if you can tolerate loving someone despite their flaws another to question love itself. I felt she was a petulant child and only gave in because Kagome kind of spoke up for him. I mean Rin knows him more than Kagome ever would...Im just left feeling that he indeed did prove his love for her. Going to the wolf's den was perfect. Yet she still questioned him. Even left her a letter. Her indeciciveness throughout the whole story of truly loving him turned me off...Thanks gor sharing though!

I wish Rin would share her secret to falling out of love so quickly!...kind of fickle? Or didn't really love him? Or a psychosis?...lol

This was just brilliant! I'm speechless!

Sweet... lovely

So beautiful! I love it!

so damn lovely 3

I really enjoyed reading your story. Really appreciate how you took the time to explain everything at the beginning and tied up everything at the end. Thank you very much for sharing it.

This is literally the best story of how Rin and Sesshomaru would end up together. I truly see no other way, and reading so many other stories on this site about them, nothing comes as close to perfection like you did. You depict them perfectly, with Sesshomaru still being his stern self yet the gradual progression of him developing feelings for Rin felt natural and realistic. Ad for Rin, what other stories do often is making Rin needy, which in truth, she isnt. I like how you portray her that she is able to defend herself. The relationship between the two are honestly so real, and the tension was beautifully crafted. I also like how you portray Sesshomaru's mother - funny and cynical. Other stories sometimes make her the villain, and I really dislike that, because I believe she really does care for her son, and would get along with Rin. Honestly, I see them having a son, and it would be adorable if you made a one-shot about their first born. Hope you make more stories about them!
Happy Writing!

love this story! I like sesshoumaru to be a little more stern and aloof but this romantic side was just as good. keep writing please!