Absolutely brilliant! Can't wait to see what element Zhalia is? Lightning maybe?

I actually found the fact that you spelt shirt wrong funny because instead of shirt you said shit.

Shadow ninja

No need to be ashamed just post SOON.

Great story!
Zhalia and Dante are really cute together and Dantes mum is kind of funny ;)
I am curious who will get which element ...

Elvira

I'd say Sophie should be earth because she steps very firmly on it and Zhalia either water(counterpart to fire) either energy :D she does have surname Moon and moon is water like sun is fire :D Lok water good thought I would rather think him air because he isn't exactly mysterious but rather happy, light and stuff :D anyway I can't wait for next chapter and I invite to my stories *sniffs* because nearly no one reads them. No one loves me anymore...*sniff*

good. I love

Dante's mum is quite fun... I like her, but I thnk it's kind of mean of her to put all of the blame on Zhalia...

I really like the structure of how this is working out :)

great chapter like it

hope you'll update soon

Wow, nice update Btw more.L/S ?

xD

awww I still like Dante's mother and his sister and they still remind me of Avatar fire nation four...:P.

hiya

R U NUTS! U CANT LEAVE A STORY THIS GOOD! U NEED 2 FINISH IT B4 I DIE OF SUSPENCE!

sorry bout that, got a bit carried away.

ur stories r so good, i can imagne watching it on tv. i mean it. :D

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hiya

R U NUTS! U CANT LEAVE A STORY THIS GOOD! U NEED 2 FINISH IT B4 I DIE OF SUSPENCE!

sorry bout that, got a bit carried away.

ur stories r so good, i can imagne watching it on tv. i mean it. :D

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Hey StarTime... You're not using correct quotations if you're writing in english hun, You're supposed to use " instead of '

Nice... I see you got your muse back! :D

I like the OCs you have here. The plot is growing too.

Update :D

I don't know about you, but I feel that if you would just correct your spelling in the summary, this story would be a lot better.