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Wow. This was a very exciting story! I wonder, where exactly did the scream and swirling vortex come from?
Hahaha, Hamsterviel is funny, how he hates everyone getting his name wrong, haha.
Nice ending, and then great cliffhanger, which was both ominous AND funny! Good job!

Nice story. Can't wait to see what happens next.