Too bad Victoria had to go through all of this to see what he is..

This concept is good; except major plot and character changes randomly; and several paragraphs are barely readable

Poor bella. After they recover mel, she needs therapy.

I don't know how I feel about this convo. im glad she told them even tho they were practically harassing her! and Rosalie's apology was filled with shade lmao. cant wait for more.

mel is too adorable lol I really wish bella would give Edward a chance. I know she wants to protect herself and mel but we need basic human connections lol

Tough subject but unfortunately not one which isn’t real.

Thanx

wow poor bella her self esteem is going to be worst than before. Edward could give her a chance to explain. i don't know if I'm going to like this Edward, the one who makes all the decisions without talking bella.

This is the wrong chapter for this story lol

mel is so cute. I really want to hurt Jessica and lauren. cant wait for the next update..

oh noo I'm feel so bad for bella. seriously now I'm emotional lol

oh now that was just a teaser chapter. Hope that there are still enough of us reading for you to update it more. Cant wait for the next chapter hopefully it'll be longer though if not I'll take what I can get.

I like the plot of your story, but I think you should re-do your story and get a beta to edit your story. Your grammar and spelling are off. If you want to be a writer someday, you need to work on those two things.

really enjoying this story! I hope you continue writing it.

I'm reading