garfield saying to Rachel why did the raven cross the street rachel hissing saying to garfield the raven cross the street to slap my idiot boyfriend to stop telling jokes about me

Hey there! Great job on this one shot :) I especially love the way you capture Beast Boy so perfectly. Keep it up! - Jess / chromaticallychallenged

D'awww, so fluffy and adorable. I love this story so much! X3 Great storyline, and although their dialogue at the end was a bit confusing, this is one of the best oneshots I've read. Great work and keep writing! :D

i really like how you adressed how raven probably could feel bb's emotions as she's an empath! very few fics do that
great attention to details and the pacing of events was just nice
i also really like how you wrote bb as more mature, but still true to his character
very well written fic, highly enjoyed this

Loved this! I loved they way Beast Boy went about confessing without actually SAYING that he liked her. And Raven was completely IC in admitting that she's afraid of getting involved like that again. Very nice ending, by the way!

This was beautiful! I love it!

You did such a perfect job with the progression of everything and the feelings.

The ending was perfect. I think how you left it with Raven saying next week was perfectly in character for her. While I wanted more, I don't think it would have been as perfect as you made it. Great job!

Overall, I like this story a lot. It's actually VERY similar to my own, but our stories diverge during the last 30 percent or so. Everyone was in-character and I like your use of their Friday night training sessions as a way to demonstrate the divide between super hero life and romantic life. You also defined their relationship quite well, especially at the end. It's very realistic that they didn't get together and live happily ever after, but that instead they took a big step into unknown territory. That's the mark of someone who's given the relationship a lot of thought and made careful efforts to advance it without letting it automatically click into the next milestone.

My only criticism is that Beastboy was a little too smooth and well-spoken at some points. I specifically thinking of his monolog in the bathroom. Not that he isn't capable of complex thoughts, but he REALLY had Raven's number at that point and it seems like he read her a little too well.

Lastly, you had a few lines that I particularly liked:

"All the animals acting...human, it must have been interesting for someone who could change into them all so easily."

Nice glimpse of Beastboy's perspective.

"Why was it that she always seemed to talk to him through doors?"

This was a great line. Of course, then you went and referred to the Malchior incident, which is a pet peeve of mine. But barring that, this was a nice reflection and something I hadn't previously noticed. You probably could have gone with a less-is-more approach with the rest of the paragraph, but that's up to your style.

""Hey." Beast Boy touched her chin, "You got to remember it's just me, so even if you screw up, I'll probably do something even stupider two seconds later." / "You're not stupid." She chuckled and gripped his hands again, just enjoying his company, loving his presence next to her."

Beastboy acknowledges Raven's unspoken nerves about being unable to navigate a romantic relationship, and relieves some of that tension in a way that I thought was very in-character. Then you define what their relationship has become, again in a way that shows a lot of control. Good stuff.

This was really really really satisfying. Glad I found it. Love it. Continue, or is fine, but if you continue, don't make them lemon-y. Make Beast Boy tease her and she'll squirm under his touch, even tho that's not her character. But JOB. c:

OMG OMG! I loved this so much :) You know what? I'm going to fave this and bookmark it for all I care! I loved the part where Beast Boy made Raven breakfast and how he confessed to her was so adorable. Really. I sincerely hope you continue writing stories like this.

That was just pure adorable bliss :)

Usually, I don't have the patience to read fairly long chapters, but this one really captured my interest. And when I was done, I had this sinking feeling in my stomach because there was only one chapter.

What I'm trying to say is: Can you write more, please?

Lol that was great! You put so much detail into it! I loved it! Well done!

this was very cute. VERY. and I love the fact that you kept them so much in character. sometimes it's hard reading such a good fanfic but cringing at the OOCness of a particular character. yours was just spot on. AGH! i'm reading all your works currently and will pretty much spam you with reviews (sorryyyy) but you're so good. so i'm not sorry. really nice oneshot. :)

that was so very lovely! :-]

Fantastic

Awesome one-shot! Continue with the great work!