OMG what a gem! love the daughter already, you put a lot of thought into her characterization. its amazing seeing Mugen and Fuu older and married hehe. can't wait to read more

please let there be more

Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter! (the only criticism i might have is a few spelling errors but the story is solid! I love it! :D haha)

Aw! I just adore their daughter already! A fatherly Mugen is a lovely one!

Hm. Interesting..

Please continue on with the story. I enjoy reading it very much!

I'm intrigued.

Great chapter can't wait to see what happens between the two! ! Thanks for continuing the story!

Awesome chapter! When's the next one?

Please update the story, it's so good! :D

Please continue this story. Its got a wonderful beginning.

OooOOOoo, please do update. This story's enjoyable. :D

I want to know what happens next! So far it's pretty interesting an I'm wondering how exactly they get together...

i begs for updates! this story is SO FRICKEN GOOD!

I think it's cute. I can't wait to see how their relationship progresses.

And it is difficult to stay true to the characters while writing your own story involving them. The best you can do is throw them into a scenario and do your best. :)

I really really like this story so far. Champloo fanfics are hard to come by so I'm happy you're writing one! Good job and please update soon:)