Reviews for Underneath It All
Heartsnevermend chapter 4 . 4/13/2018
Awesome
Guest chapter 31 . 11/5/2017
Damn it this was almost finished. Let's hope someday you get back to it.
mynameislizzie3 chapter 31 . 9/30/2017
Please...please...please...please come back to us!

I know it’s a forlorn hope, but this has always been my joint favourite story along with Now and Then... I re read it every few months and continue to get real pleasure from it. But I’d love to find out how it all ends. But f there is any chance, however slim, of you giving us another chapter, I’d be SO grateful!
itssheila chapter 31 . 9/13/2017
love this so much! hope you get to finish it ;)
Anon chapter 1 . 9/10/2017
Maybe it's a bit late to post this but just wanted to say it's a shame this didn't get to be finished. It is one of the best things I've read on this site. Thank you for writing it in the first place, it's cheered me up more than you'll ever know.
Huge fan chapter 31 . 2/16/2016
Hey.

Every time I think you've finished surprising us, you throw another curve ball.

It was all going so well...then Emily confesses to having made a sex tape (with/for) Tony?

Naomi covered up well, but it bothered the hell out of her. And so it would!

And that comment about Emily asking him to delete it? This IS Tony Stonem we're talking about?

I'm pretty sure at some stage in the near future, Naomi will be treated to footage of a naked and willing Emily giving Mr Stonem some oral treatment. Our favourite blonde will be horrified, no matter how much she appears to shrug it off.

Trouble ahead?
descro chapter 31 . 10/24/2015
dude i love the relationship between pria and effy ! please make them be more than friends
Guest chapter 31 . 10/14/2015
For realz girl where you been? I need my fix haha
carzzzzjr chapter 31 . 10/9/2015
Love this story. The relationship between Naomi and Emily is so cute and well-written! One of my favorite Naomily fics.

I really can't understand how someone like Emily was ever seriously dating someone like Tony though. Their relationship doesn't make sense to me; she's so sweet and level-headed, I feel like she would never be attracted to a pretentious dick like him. And the fact that they had a sex tape... ughhhh ew.
Guest chapter 31 . 9/23/2015
Rereading this story and I love it just as much
harpo7887 chapter 5 . 8/11/2015
One of my favorite story.i must say the writer is yet full of emotions and job! Highly recommended!
Guest chapter 31 . 6/26/2015
Please continue! This is great!
Dacookiemonsta chapter 31 . 4/28/2015
\(_)/ yay I finally got a chance to read your incredible writing! Thank you for the congrats :). My axtonn is pretty amazing ha. I absolutely love this story, I can't get enough. Keep up the remarkable work :) you awesome sauce!
marsupial1974 chapter 31 . 4/27/2015
Okay, I've just finished my third read through of this chapter, which is always a good thing, because it brings out more emotions:)

One of my favorite things about this story, and your writing style in general, is the subtleties you add along with the details. Sometimes they're barely there, but they're powerful nonetheless. I mean, you've written Katie beautifully, every thing that makes her Katie is present and accounted for:) I totally wish I could write Katie and get her exactly right like you have :D

I'm going to address a couple of things about this chap;
1) How sweet is Naomi when Emily gets sick? Am I right? Of course I'm right! And the way she is with Micah? Well, that just makes me melt...I'd definitely settle down and have kids with Naomi ;D

2) Will the reappearance of Pria in Emily's life affect her and Naomi? I mean, Naomi didn't tell Emily about her for a reason, so is Emily going to question that reason? I'm just curious...

3) What's the dealio with Effy and Katie? What's their history...is it friendship gone bad? No friendship at all? Or were they more to each other at one time?

And last but not least...

4) Katie Fitch is MARRIED?

As always, my friend, an excellent chapter...always worth the wait:)
Tiffythetitan chapter 31 . 4/19/2015
Lots of amusing bits and pieces in this chapter but my favorite part was Naomi's TLC of a sick Emily. I felt the love.

p.s. My vote is for a 3rd chapter of your other story. :)
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