Silver Aigul... I see what you did there... ;)

2 badges in one charapter? This needs to go slower and have a lot more of description in it.

Lyra thinks a baby Giratina is cute? Well, thats interesting.

Anyway, great job with the story, cant wait for the next one, and also lol at Eusine with Latios

I love the antics of Zapdos, his vocabulary is amusing.

OMG, I love the "Its payback time, motherfucker" line. that was awesome

I also liked Silver beating the crap out of Suicune

nice chapter, I like how Silver ends up giving Entei and Raikou to his mom and Jasmine, respectively.

whoa, wait a minute. I think you mistook Hitmonchan for Machamp when he did the Cross Chop.

Also, nice add in with Silver facing the last Dragonite

nice chapter, interesting to see how quickly Silver mastered his changing from human form to pokemon form. I still cant believe I am still the only person to review this story.

I love the Gale of Darkness reference with Shadow Lugia, that was cool. Again, I wish you would make an Orre region game adaptation, be it Colleseum or XD, but I do respect your decision on that. I am not happy about it, but I will respect it.

yay, a double update! awesome! And I see that you referenced the Shadow Pokemon plot used in Colleseum(Sp?) and XD Gale of Darkness. which reminds me, any chance of doing something with those particular games? I did like the Shadow Pokemon gimmick in Colleseum and XD GoD, and there is a possible romance between Wes and Rui, the stars of Colleseum. that would be cool

great chapter, cant believe I am the only one bothering to comment on the story. Seriously, whats up with that? meh, oh well

I love antics of the Legendary Trio of Johto, they are so amusing.

hold on a moment... how can the Aerial Ace move miss? I thought it was impossible?

nice introduction to the story, personally, I think that they go by a little too quickly in my opinion; too much stuff happens in one chapter. like now; Silver already has 2 badges and its only the first chapter