aww...poor raphie...

awwwwww it's dramatic and vool

So good the feels Sequal or not but that was to good that last sentence had said so much in those 8 little words.

Hello,

I loved that story, we entered in Raph's head and we were able to know and understand how he feels. I love Raphael, and it is difficult to describe his feelings and his point of view... His anger... Nevertheless, you did it very well and it was nice to read :)
But, to me, I think the lyrics are superfluous... But it is just my opinion

Good job, congrats for that story
Hiveen.

Awesome! I love the song choice too, It captures the mood of the story well.

Woah! That was really deep... 0_0

Yay! LOVED it! Great job on this as your first fic. I know it's been a whole since you posted and by the long list of titles you've written have come a long way since then. Let me just add my voice to some of these older reviews by saying, you write wonderfully, you captured Raph's confused fury perfectly and that I just can't wait to delve into more of your work.

Well done! You're very inspiring! I would be very honored if you had a chance to read some of my TMNT stories and let me know what you thought. Until then, I'll be reading on . . .

can you please do more its really good

Ehhhh it's ok but it needs more details. Pretty good for ur first though.

This piece gave me chills. The emotions are so raw and written so beautifully. And the last line. . . it drove it home; I felt everything in that last line. A perfect ending to a incredible work. And the song you chose fits it so well.
Love it!

That. Was. GREAT! One of the best fanfictions I have ever read! Please, oh please write more!

i remember when i started my first fic it sucked. I can't wait to read more of your work. Im really picky about what i read and i really liked your story. I hope you continue to write and update because so far what ive read from you ive really liked. :) if you even need a TMNT nerd to bounce ideas off of send me a message no one knows more about the show then i do.

Keep Up the Amazing work :)

Love,

Willow 3

This was very true to Raph an u did a great Job with the writing, but sometimes u have to save urself.

Beautiful, absolutley beautiful. I love this, well done :) I live how you really sort of exposed the emotions behind Raph's mask. It was a great metaphor :) you are awesome :)

Wow, UR first TMNT fic? This was really amazing for UR first Ninja Turtles story. I loved every bit of it. It was so deep and described Raphael's character perfectly to a "T". Great job and I hope you'll be writing more Ninja Turtles fics soon. This one about Raphael was just fantastic! In my opinion, it takes a lot to write a kind of story like this.

Keep on writing!