Ahh So sweet 3 :)

Very sweet! It was written very well.

Aw that was such a sweet story! I loved it and I hope you write more with the shules family!:)

Hello you. Great story. Did I tell you get some privileges now that I am your beta? Well, for one, I was yesterday in Leiden (a Dutch city), to check out the university and the studies. My inbox is filled with a thousand emails. I picked yours first, before all the others. They have to wait for tomorrow, since I have to do my mathematics homework and am going to beta chapter two tonight. :)

As for this story: it was awesome! It's totally Shawn to make such a fuss about his father having Christmas with them and then realising that (something that Juliet already knew) it's actually not so bad. Only one note: "I'll be there in a bit. I'm getting Ty, ready." The comma should be removed. Now, it seems like she is getting Ty, and then says 'ready'. The rest was awesome. :P

aw! i absoultly adore this! please continue this i would love to hear about the rest of there lives!:)

AAWWW that was soo fluffy and sweet X3 though why you decided to write a Christmas story WAAAAY before Christmas is beyond me (you take 'thinking outside the box' to a whole new level) lol absolutely LOVED it though! i hope to read more (and longer) storys from you soon .~

Aw, this was sweet and I do love me some grandpa Henry