WOW i could image ending like this

I like it! This alternate ending brings a whole world of possibilities to my mind... I mean, if you want to expand the fic, you certainly can. There is much to develop there. Though as a one shot it's very nice, it does give off a "and then what?" feeling... Or maybe it's just me, who gets the same feeling with pretty much every single one shot (hence why my stories seem to never end XD). But this one was very good. If you decide to continue it I will read it, if you don't... I'll probably read it again just for the heck of it. But I was happy to find this, I was kind of sad (ok, very sad) when Son died... But then again he did kill Sho and Kei was pretty angry about it... And the whole point of Moon Child was for everyone to die at the end (I hate that because it limits the posibilities of writing realistic fabrics so much!)... But I do love alternate endings, mainly because I hate to see my favorite characters die. So sorry, I'm ranting again XD back to the point: I like how you write and I will be looking forward to see some more of your work. Now I'll go take a peek to your other stories