Wow... possessive Thor is hot as hell! And I loved how you portrayed Loki and made retain his true nature. Absolutely loved it! Thank you for writing this! Kudos!

RAAAAPE! HOLY SHIT, LOKI NEEDS A RAPE WHISTLE!

Wow, so, obsession, possessiveness, threats, having to fight for dominance every single time, Loki never actually encouraging him and shedding tears during the act... And were calling it romance? I'm not seeing any sort of conversation to indicate that this is a kink between consenting adults. I'm seeing plenty that looks like rape though.

Nice loved it

Oh that was just beautiful from start to finish!

Heh, it was good. I just like how Thor is... so tight to his brother. In movies or comics he is always there for Loki! Good story :)

3333 Quite enjoyed it.

I liked this. I think you should write a version from Loki's perspective, it's obvious he's jealous of Thor's friends at points during this.

Dat was really good I love it _

I just can't handle all the feels oh ;_; you described Loki perfectly, exactly the way I imagine himself about their relationship. And Thor's feelings are well written and a bit neat, I think. First Thor fanfic? Congrats, it's wonderful.

that was so amazing! I love this pairing so much! I loved that, even though loki obviously is in love with thor, he won't give into this relationship so easily. I think that you've got his character pretty good ;) Really lovely and I have to admit that possessive thor/submissive loki is quite hot xD

Lovely style and I kind of like how crazy dominant Thor is with Loki here.

Beautiful, very sweetly done

Beautiful

Good