Good chapter, I think that Zheva should take charge in sex in the next chapter because that is her character.

Wow. That was...wow. ;)

I love this story so much! Although I do ignore the whole ziva sleeping with McGee part! Keep up the good work! xx 3

Amazing, just amazing. That was some pretty powerful stuff. Well done and thank you for writing this x

You have a beautiful stories, good ideas... But McGee and Ziva? Sorry for that but I can't believe it can be happen.

Perfection!

SO CUTE! GREAT STORY!

It was good on the romantic side like what they said but I think you could've left out the other stuff and just made it lovey and appropriate for younger kids without so much description... but anyways I still thimk your other stories are good!

Love this! 3

very good!

I loooooveeee this! So hot! Amazing job! :)

Great chap(: great story(:

Excuse me whilst I go and cry over how AMAZINGLY ROMANTIC this was! I have read this four times so far, and I still cannot get over the fact that someone has written a story that is so beautiful and sensitive. Seriously, this is perfect. You had me at "A woman that just needs to be loved.". This is just so... Words cannot, and I don't think ever will, describe the utter beauty of this fantastic piece of work.

I don't know what else to say. I mean, you absolutely nailed this. I'm still overwhelmed at how wonderful you are at writing. The way you characterised Tony and Ziva, I think, was so... I don't know how to describe it.

Thank you for posting this. I am now ready to die. It is a perfect story. I could not have asked for anything better.

THANK YOU.

-Tivaau

Wow! I loved it!

I would LOVE to see that on the show! however I don't think the writers will give us that much! :P I loved the end, all their insecurities coming out, or especially hers! And he wasnt leaving!

Like i've said before, can't wait to read more of your stories :) xoxox