This is so good, i love this story...please i hope you continue this great story

Please continue this story, i can't really handle the suspense of what happen next

Vanqua forever! :)

My eyes are threatening to water. WAHHHH!

lol Axel can dish out but can't take the hit! Nicely done :D Brought up her side of the painful coin...if that makes sense.

This is really interesting. I studied mental disorders so I'm really curious as to where this is going and what will happen between the characters. I'd like to see how Aqua handles her PTSD- so far I haven't seen her experiencing symptoms.

Keep writing!

I'm really liking this story! It's well written, and I'm liking the interactions between Aqua and Vanitas. :) Will there be a chapter on Aqua and going a bit more into her struggles, and Vanitas helps her? I'd love to see that!

Please keep writing! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Thats very interesting, looking forward to what happens next.

First off, I would like to sincerely apologize about the typo in my last review. Seriously, my iPod hates me, I swear. A pairing name instead of his real name? Come on, autocorrect.

Rants aside:

Yay! Axel-kun, my fellow pyro, will be making an appearance soon! *excitement*

And thank you. I very much enjoy my screen name!

I like how Aqua's kind of breaking him out of his antisocial shell, even that is a schizo trait. I should know hehe. And you're right about child-like innocence. I DO find myself sympathizing with him. It was really sad to hear him say his parents usually only call once a month.

Anyways, thanks for the update and I can't wait until the next!

Keep up the good work,

~Pyro

Hmm...

Interesting! Normally Sora's the schizo and VanitasXAqua is one of his voices/hallucinations. And a Vanitas that seems cold yet almost...innocent? Very, very interesting!

I think I like it. ~

Keep up the good work,

~Pyro

There needs to be more Mantua on this sight. I like Terrqua too, but mostly Vanqua

Intersting so I guess Terra is dead? Or stuck with Xehanort?