I am super happy to see this update. and not only that but with two chapters!

I really hope this is a Memphis x OC. As much as I love Carol, I just don't think she and Memphis are a good pair. I mean, both are brats Memphis would need someone who not only inspires him to become a better ruler but actually thinks of the consequences of their actions, who thinks rationally and doesn't trust so blindly. Hate to say it but Egypt's screwed with both Carol and Memphis as a pair and their rulers. Please please please make this a Memphis x OC

Very good

Could you make this be a Memphis love story? or are you making this an Ismir love story? I really hope its the former though...

Yo! I found this story many years ago and it was really sad when it got into hiatus. But you came back and that's amazing?! I always hear stories of authors coming back after years of disappearing but it has never happened to me, lol. I'm glad it was the case with this story. I've always liked the relationship between Cassie and Carol and how they contrast with each other. I don't dislike Carol, but she's so incredibly naive, and I'm glad there can be a Sancho Panza to her Don Quijote.

This is getting good! I like Cassie personality. She is a more realist than Carol. Thank you for the wonderful chapter. Can't wait when them two are in the ancient time!

Interesting first chapter!
Can't wait to read more!

AGHHHHHH ITS SOOOO GOOOOOD!

wow this story is excellent! please update!

Please please please please please please please please please please please UPDATE!

You have no idea how long I have been looking for something like this! I hope you decide to continue this exciting story! :)

Hi we love this storey but when are you going to do the next chapters we been whaiting for them but an Cassandra have some powers that she keeps hidden and be a seer ppplleeaasssseee ok bye

This fic seems to be abandoned, which makes me a bit sad because it's really good (even though I don't usually read OC-centric fanfiction). I think you should move this to the Ouke no Monshou section because there IS one now and it's really small so we need all the stories we can get.

I would never say that you should stop writing, it's a great idea, but there is a fandom specifically for Ouke no Monshou. I had to search hard to find this story. You'll likely get more support for your story if you start publishing there as well. The majority of the readers of this fandom have likely never heard about ONM, which is why they think you deceived them. I realize that it's your first fanfiction and that is was last updated a while back, but please continue!

Just wondering if this story will be updated anytime soon because I really would like to read more of it.