This... is one of the best Sci-fi mlp stories I have read. You may never be coming back, but I will always love this story. Guess it was time to pay my respects.

This is a bit late... But this is/was an amazing story to read. I don't know if you ever want to continue this, but it was a glorious masterpiece, and I look forward to whatever this story holds and when or if it is continuing with great anticipation.

Also they represent Balance, the Dawning Dusk, the calm one, represents the Night side and is like a ninja. Dusking Dawn, the rash one, represents the Day side and is like a barbarian. Wait, mega idea! They switch personalities at night and day! Yeah, that's the ticket!

Hey, I got an OC, Dawning Dusk or Dusking Dawn, a Stallion with a deep sea blue coat and mane, with a cutie mark of Two Stallions fighting, one blue(him), one red(His enemy/rival, Red Death). He is a fighter, and his fighting skills are OP to the max, but thats all he is good at. He's a little gone in the head, if you know what I mean. He has multiple personality disorder, Dawning Dusk is the calm, cool, patient and calculating, and don't forget deadly Dark Hero who overall good but has a dark personality. Dusking Dawn, a rash, jumpy, big ego'd, dashing hero who will jump off a cliff, wrap himself in TNT, or even jump into the mouth of a giant monster to do something or save his friends. Then theres the original personality, lost when he got in an accident at the age of Ten, or maybe, just maybe, just won't come out yet. That means he is not lost, just won't show his face, and the other two personalities hope thats the case. Also, the two personalities always switch with every fight. Its random of who's in charge when there NOT in a fight, so they are a BAD*** team together when they "Mind Meld", which they only do in major fights. Soooo, what do you think of my OC?

Dear Erol

how i have most sincerely enjoyed this, the first chapter of this story, if ever there was a fine auther on this website it is you, your storys make perfect sense, your grammer is impeckable, and i whish only to encourage you to write more, as macklemore once said n his song, 'the great artists were not great because they were great at birth, the greats were great because they painted alot, with more pracitce and further in depth story lines, i think you could make it to the top, what your friend 'bidie' said is right, if there is not a book ready for you to read, write it yourself, youve made a great start, continue my friend, it will be worth the effort in the end.

Wonderful ! inspired me to write my own some day.
TJ

Yo Erol. I'm not usually one to keep my hopes up, but I'm going to say this anyway.

If you ever do find it in you to update this fic, just know that there is at least one person who is waiting for it to happen. Even six months after the last update.

You got me hooked man. That's all I'm gonna say.

Out;
VeeEight

Wow. This is honestly the best story I've read on this site. I mean, it's refreshing to find someone who knows how to SPELL. I love how you balance out the action and the character devealopment. Some parts even made me tear up.

I just have one complaint.

This takes place million of years in the future. They have made mind-blowing advances in technology, culture, weapons and medicine. They control immense streches of space and thousand of stars. And they still have WONDERBREAD?! That stuff tastes like dirty tissues! Being the foodie that I am, I have to say, I AM SO DISSAPOINT. Wonderbread's name should have Home-Made-Artisnal-Fucking-Small-Batch-Sourdough-Bread-From-Brooklyn.

On a semi-related topic, do you like jokes? I have some.

Why did Sally cross the road?
She didn't because her planet got incinerated.

Knock knock.
Who's there?
Not Sally.

AHAHAHAHAHHA. I'm such a bad person.

Woah! That was pretty epic! And I read it one half at a time so I messed up a bunch! Great job! This will take forever to read. Keep it up!

Yup, can't wait for that new chapter! Might I add about my OC is that he hates the nickname "Vinny". Not to important, but just something to use for character development/ hilarity. Get that new chapter done and cool story bro.

Hay you're back! I'm so sorry about your parent's divorce, but it means a lot to me and the other readers who have loved this story and anxiously waiting for new chapters. We will always have your back!

Holy Celestia this story is AMAZING! Though if it's not to much trouble, I would like to modify my character a bit. Cloud is definatly a rouge, born in the Celestia empire, but deserted during military training. He is part robot, not as much as Blaze, but his brain has been mechanically enhanced as well as his sensory organs such as his ears and eyes. A couple organs have been replaced, but most of his physical stature was left untouched due to him going AWOL. He hated the Celestial empire for exploiting religeous propoganda, yet he didn't feel right joining Luna's forces as he felt she accused Celestia of something without any prior evidence and caused the war to begin with.

He currently travels as a rouge, doing odd jobs around the universe such as space piracy and working at canteens. This is all of course, assuming you accepted my OC. One more thing is also that me and Colton, even though we fight for diferent reasons can be freinds if you want. If you can't find a way to make it fit I'm fine, but if you feel it could lead to a good storyline, by all means go for it.

If you need anything else, I'd be happy to help, your cappy was great, though making your character an alicorn could make him a bit overpowered, but you gave a good reason for it, so I'll hold off on any critisism for now. Good luck!

its good to see you are back, and i am sorry about your parents but sometimes good things sprout out of the ashes made by bad things.

Welcome Back Erol! Sorry about your parents though.

I anxiously await your new stories.