Sorry, posted by accident mid-sentence. This is a continuation of my review for chapter 1. Anyways, if you were going to make Rebecca part of the gang, you should have just had her as a junior like the others. This would have been a better choice simply to avoid readers like me from picking up on it and disliking it because we're crazy about little details. She seems to have no other friends, which is weird. What about the year when Elena, Bonnie, Caroline and Matt were all in middle school still and she started high school. Did she spend the year alone waiting to hang out with a bunch of people a year younger? It's very strange and unrealistic.

Lastly, the friendship with Jeremy. I get that Jeremy has a relationship with Vicki and she's three years older than him, but considering the circumstances behind how they became friends, I'd say it's pretty unique. Why are Rebecca and Jeremy friends? Rebecca seems to be Elena's friend, and she's 18 while Jeremy is 15. Huge difference going on there. It's honestly just kinda weird. It might make more sense if Rebecca was a year younger, but even still it's kinda just random.

I liked the meeting with Damon, and I like how you described Rebecca's appearance. I look forward to seeing what's next.

So far it's interesting, although I have a few concerns. The first major thing is your choice of name. Rebecca's a pretty name, yes, but there's already Rebekah Mikaelson in TVD. It doesn't work well when your OC has the same name as another important character, even if the names are spelled differently. With the plethora of names to choose from, it frustrates me that you didn't pick one that nobody else has.

The second thing that I dislike is how Rebecca's mother died in childbirth. I understand that women today still die giving birth, but it's also pretty uncommon, especially with modern medicine. You wrote that her mother had many miscarriages, and that a pregnancy was risky, but even still, it felt very weak to me. It just doesn't seem realistic. Also, a baby that Rebecca has to take care severely limits her in terms of life choices. No matter what happens in the story, her number one priority can never be herself or whoever she falls in love with. It will always come back to her little sister, who she is basically fully responsible for. While that is sweet, it's also restrictive. It will interfere with adventures, risks and whatnot because Rebecca will always have to hold back so that she can be there for her sister. She needs to stay alive, which means she can't get involved in anything that endangers her life. That obviously includes the supernatural. I think this aspect will limit how far you can go with your character.

The third thing is the fact that Rebecca hangs out so much and is so close with the "gang" despite being in a different year. In high school, teenagers typically hang with their year mates. Not saying it doesn't happen, but

yay!

So far I really like it... i wonder if the time travel spell will take her right back the when she left?... i really like your pov writing, and how you have written the characters.

Bullshit Shes the Vampire Slayer can sense Vampires and is even faster them demon how the hack does she get taking down so easily by a newby Vamp. Seems like all her powers are totally useless. Kinda annoying such an obvious way to force the Story.

Sooooo my big question is... When Rebekah comes in.. how sit gonna feel jugglig the two girls with the same name?

Another great chapter. I loved reading this and I really can't wait to read how the next season will go. Please post it soon.

I like the story

I've just started chapter 3 and I'm really loving this story. so excited to keep reading.

Wow this is cool... I like how you're giving your OC some depth instead of saying "Okay she was Elana's very best friend or sister." And tbph I don't like Elana much either lol

This is probably my favorite part. Becca being the one to let Damon know she would be willing to spend an eternity with him if that’s what he wanted.

This is my third time reading this. I love it.

I really enjoyed your storyline. It's such a wonderful and interesting deviation from the original plotline. Thank you for sharing your words.

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Love this!

Can't wait to read the rest!