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Guest chapter 6 . 7/24/2017 I do like the story. I don't like however the fact that you make it like Harry is "cheating" on Ginny and it's wrong that he's so close to Severus. That's very judgemental of you and shows that you are probably and one man/one woman kind of relationship person. It's sad. You can have an emotional connection to someone that you don't with someone else and it's not "cheating". I'm very glad you moved on quickly from that scene as I would have stopped reading if you hadn't. I do think James is overly upset just to be upset and gives nothing to the story as of yet, but it may if you continue it in the right way. |
JaneDoh0 chapter 6 . 5/14/2016 This was a pretty interesting story. I haven't seen one like this where Harry and Giinny are raising Harry and Severus's children. I feel really bad for Severus (who has drawn the short end, as always) and for Albus. James is doing the exact same thing to Victoire that Harry did to Ginny, and while that is probably why he is reacting so tensely, doesn't make him particularly sympathetic. Harry is a really selfish and cruel man in this one. He torments Severus and hurts Ginny at every turn. It is too bad you haven't continued it-I would have liked to see how you resolve this. |
M3m chapter 6 . 5/25/2014 Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. I love this fic. |
K chapter 6 . 4/20/2013 Way too much fucking and fuck ups that drags on and on through the whole fic. Problem with these types of fics is that they get boring after a while, becouse they get predictable - and lets see... the only unexpected thing for me was that Marrieta character, but overall it changed nothing... so, I try to read some of you other fics, becouse this one sucks. |
Moonstone blaze chapter 6 . 3/5/2013 I like this fanfic since its full of angst. But really it is hard to like any specific character since each one lie and can't seem to understand their emotions at all. All the guys are cheating with one another while they love someone else. So messed up. Like Snape and Malfoy having sex together? God eww I hope not. And I feel pity for James, hope he'll get his common sense back together. I like Marietta's character alot, even though I didn't like her from the Harry Potter book. But finally some therapy action lol |
WeirdAndAwesome chapter 5 . 2/10/2013 You're an amazing writer, love the story. Angsty, realistic.. Perfect. |
futurefilledwithrain chapter 6 . 1/30/2013 I so hope you come back to this very, very soon! |
Skarlettefox chapter 4 . 12/7/2012 And i thought i had secrets... Wow. Wow, this is sooo unbelieveably awesome! |
VamKir5SilverKnight chapter 6 . 11/4/2012 This story is so sad but why does it bring me so joy when you update please tell me he ends up with snape please and please update more :D |
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 6 . 10/2/2012 I could be making money at this time. But, you want to know something? Our family is the most important thing for us, so it's our top priority. Ginny speaks as if money is her top priority. And, James, Harry should not be held responsible for Ginny's actions. What would a life with Snape actually entail? They would fight so much. The media would go into a frenzy. He had dealt with them before, though. Don't allow expectations of others to hold you back from your dream, your happiness. With Ginny, there was always something missing, but it was perfect. Theirs was the way marriage was supposed to be, if you didn't count all of the secrets and lies. Exactly. You hide yourself behind a mask. You want to be normal. Just like Dursleys. Doesn't this comparison feel like a slap in your face? Why would I want to know all of the nitty gritty details of his affair? It's not an affair. Ginny, you are lost. There was an afternoon spent at sea, searching for sea serpents and shrakes to be used in potions ingredients. Beautiful. Harry and Severus are good together. By the way, is Harry still a snake-speaker? Snape was the only person he told when he considered leaving the Auror department, the only person he had ever confided in regarding the wartime nightmares that still plagued him from time to time. Severus Snape is good for Harry. How can it be that Ginny doesn't notice Harry's nightmares, or ignores them? Snape was the only one who would understand a lot of the things that Harry did tell him. You are in love, Harry and Severus. "I don't find that very funny at all," Albus said coldly. A very small part of him felt concerned for his older brother. While the extent he was taking this was ridiculous, James was hurting Agree with Albus. Snape loved Harry, didn't he? There was something very much alive between his fathers. So how on earth could Snape involve himself with other men? Even if Harry was married to Ginny... Confusion. Two and a half hours later, when Snape and Draco finally emerged, neither boy noticed as, to the shock of their fathers, they were lost in a lively discussion about the Keyholder novels. Brilliant. Marietta has given them excellent advice: think about your wishes, separately from your obligations. "And I think…I think that…maybe…you should…you should…talk…to Snape. Work things out with him before you come back to me." Agree. Just don't allow shadow of marriage to push you to Ginny. Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck, Albus Severus, Draco, Harry, James, Lily, Lucius, Scorpius, Severus. |
VioletVervain chapter 6 . 9/30/2012 I really liked the chapter. Especially the conversation of Albus and Scorpius was somehow unexpected. But I was convinced James disappeared to Snape, so where is he? Well, I hope something is going to happen between Harry and Snape during that marriage break period. And hopefully Harry gets a bit angrier at Ginny. Of course he was the one who cheated, but all those things she said in the therapy she's never said before, thinking that suffering quietly would help the marriage is just ridiculous of her. About the therapy per se, I've never been to a therapy for couples, but I've been to one and I think it's completly okay how you wrote it. There's talking and strange 'homework', that's just how it is ;) Hope you'll update again soon, xoxo |
Bloody dawn chapter 6 . 9/30/2012 I really really like this chapter I'm glad that Harry and Ginny are finally seeing how unhealthy their relationship had been as much as Harry and Severus' is. James is not taking well at all but i think it's because it resembles his situation with Teddy. About Albus and Scorpius, i've always been a fan of this couple so i would be happy if they end up together in this story ;) I can't wait to read what's coming next |
Clockpark chapter 6 . 9/30/2012 Really nice idea of the therapy. I, myself, haven't got a clue either of how these things work. Although I think that there would have been more than this one session to get all these things out of them. Because there is more the one issue disrupting the whole marriage. I'm really interested where JAmes went after flooing out of Teddy's and Victoire's apartment. I first thought that, without consciously deciding he would end up at Snape's when Albus went there to talk to him. What makes me cringe a bit is that Snape seems to have quite a lot affairs with married people, if Draco an he were really shagging as Scorpius assumes and I he that it's not the case, but I think I'm probably wrong. Because I know that at some point in later chapter we'll see that this marriage is going to be discontinued and Harry wants to be with Snape. But then they, to, have to work to quite a lot issues, when he was intimate with anyone he liked to be because there were no obligations. THis is what I then find hard to believe that Snape could stay faithful to Harry, although it is obvious that both are in love with each other. I'm looking forward to the talk between Snape and Albus and the whereabouts of JAmes and if he can be directed ino another direction of thinking from it wants to do at this point. |
Calmlessness chapter 6 . 9/30/2012 Guh! I don't know what to say... It's well written, and all. Though I doubt much of readers know how that kind of therapy should look like, and for my liking it's just great. Logical and with the ending I wished it would have.;) But (no offence) the pathology scares me. Draco Malfoy?! I would get it if he went to some neighbour or something... But cheating on Harry with his school nemesis? They really worth each over. -_-" Anyway chapter is long and nice,and a lot happened(where's James?!) so don't let my hopes down and update soon! Best in a week!;) |
M3mnoch7 chapter 6 . 9/29/2012 Epic! |