Oh my word... How long it's been... I personally have been down and so I decided to come back to one of the things that normally cheered me up, your stories. But I forgot one marvelous thing about your stories, there is always a twist to keep us entertained. I have to say though, I got hit with a huge curve ball when I started reading this chapter. I had an abusive father. Verbally, mentally, physically... and even though I had come to a point where I can say I could forgive him, I still didn't like the man, he was nothing like a father needed to be. About three months ago I got the call that he died. and word for word with your story, I don't miss him, I miss what I couldn't have and wont really ever get, and I haven't really dealt with it, so it was really hard for me to get through that section. Past that I think the chapter was magnificent as always, typical Roxas speaking before actually thinking what he says. I hope you do continue this as a sequel (if you haven't already) and I look forward to everything else you have to offer with what you write. Expect more reviews from me as I look to your stories for the uplift and entertainment they always provide. Until then...
Roxas V Hikari

Okay. First off... IM SO SORRY FOR NOT REVEIWING UR STORIES LATELY! I've just been extremely lazy and uninterested in reading for some reason. :( I promise I'll start reading more often. Now to the story! Yay! It was a happy ending! I feel sorry for Rox bcuz of all that happened to him in his past. I recently read a book that was about child abuse that was a bit intense. So hearing all of what happened to Rox made me just want to squeeze him! But I'm sure he wouldn't like a stranger to do that. And Akina sounds just adorable and is a very pretty name. When axel spanked him tho I was just yelling "noooooo! Don't Axel! That's mean and Roxas is gonna get mad at u!" QAQ but still it was a happy ending in the end and a great story. :3 ur so awesome at writing!

your really good, i loved the first one and now this one, i ended up getting an account otherwise i would have said so sooner

OMG you added a bonus chapter! This literaly mande my day!

D'awwwww. I cried, this was tooo cute :3 I love Akina! Sequel sequel sequel!

soooo cute! Oh i was scared tht axel would rlly hit rox then when rox went down after axe and riku said tht and rude had to hold axe back. I thought he'd actually leave both Rox and Kina! DX
Buuuuut, it's an AMAZING piece! You rock! Keep up the awesome job!

Aww, I cant wait for Christmas! ONE DAY LEFT. Well more like hour, now :) This was really cute, and the name Akina is ADORABLE! *Sigh* I just love this :3

After a year of reading this series i'm happy with it's ending. Axel and Roxas are married, they are having a kid, and we got our lemon. , Reading the first story it was hard to think of this happening for them, Roxas seemed like a lost cause that could break at any moment; furthermore, Axel would have been just fine moving on from Roxas onto other people. But you found (and made) a way for it to work out in the end. It has been a real joy reading this series, and hey, if you ever want to continue it you can just pick up with them getting a baby. :) I can't wait to see what new ideas you come up with for other stories...
Until then, your faithful (but sometimes absent) reader...
-Roxas Ventus Hikari

Ohhh myyy gooossshhh! What a great ending! The lemon was delicious! They totally earned that. And the bits with the baby were spot on. Really. I am a parent and I can say you nailed it, how you Just. Want. To. Sleep. And they cry. And cry. It's awful but completely worth it in the end. I love how you showed Axel & Roxas' frustration (Axel's "goddammit!" made me lol) but they didn't get angry (which sleep deprivation will certainly make you easily do).

Great job. I look forward to reading more from you.

Ooooooooooo mmmmmmmmmmm ffffffffffffff gggggggggggg. MAJOR yaoi fanboy nosebleed. Where do you come up with shit. Major hard on. I will miss this story almost more than you will. I think you should do an epilogue. Like 15 years later. When they have a baby and stuff. Just a thought. I can't believe that it's over. Can you pm your response to this please when you have time.
Lots of love
KeyBlade Master13

Herpaderpalerp my emotions are like fizzaaaaaaaah. First, I like lemons(; they're so yummy rofl but Axel was too cuteeee lol. And yay for adoption! Blikkah I was like almost crying cuz I was like fwahhh so adorbzzz but then THE END and I was like merrrrrrrrrrrp, epic sad face! But its a cute ending...and perhaps a new beginning? (; lol and if you can even understand me right now, you deserve a gold medal XD I think I'm secretly on drugs but shhhhh. Lol good job, I will be waiting for other new stories/chapters. Buh-bye, love. Lolol

Aww yay! I'm so happy for them! This was a really nice story :)
I hope your other stories end like this one
And I've reviewed this story before, but I didn't feel like logging in
The nickname is my username

This is the end? already? aawwww. I liked this story a whole bunch and I'm happy they were approved for adoption! yayy! lol and yes, yay for lemon. It was so hot! 8D It was a pleasure for reading this story and I look forward for more of em. :3

ITS OVER. jdkfjdkjaflks Now what do i do with my life? Haha jk i'm reading your other stories too! I really loved this story and the first one too. They were really well written and amazing, keep up the awesomeness! :D

Jiujdhapdkqjrlanroqjdkjdkqdk aeq omg perf! Lol so cute! Poor Roxy though! D: I don't want it to be over, but I understand your pain...lol