Reviews for Hide and Seek
The-KLF chapter 1 . 2/13/2016
Aww, yes! This was great! They can get through fights just fine :-)
demuredemeanor chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Again, so necessary. And the minor fights are always the most frustrating, so this was very well done :)
iHeartYou13 chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
oh my heart. amazing :)
teelduo chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Wonderful.
LoveJessieLou chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
This definitely wasn't what I was expecting. I'm kind of glad you chose to show some of the not so fluffy times in their relationship. It makes it seem real. I just love this 'verse you've created.
Mark C chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
I remember this well and can totally see Kate doing what she did. When Al woke up and asked Kate about Rick, you just had to feel sorry for all involved.

Loved seeing Al want to look for Rick right away and them going out to look. It wasn't surprising they found him at the Old Haunt.

I enjoyed the scene when they found Rick and Al did most of the talking. Kate's apology was good as well as Rick reassuring the girls that he was going nowhere and that the wedding was still on.

Well done.
Copop chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Good thing Al was there to insist on go find Rick :)
dopeysac chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Adorable Al! I love that kid! Very cute and sweet chapter.

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someheartslove chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
I love it how you have us this piece of the story.

Kate freaked out a bit, but it's all okay. And I love Al. In all situations, and in this too. SO adorable and innocent.

Great story! :)
Deb838 chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Ahhh see... real Kate needs her own Al to sort her out and make her do what she needs to do!
lv2bnsb1 chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
That was great! Harder to do everything when there is a child in a story. You can't just run out into the night, or have a loud fight, or date without planning sitters etc. You've always done such a marvelous job of filling in the details with these characters.
Fictional Mind chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Awww this is beautiful. Just the right amount of tears and making up again :) I love it :)
gmay chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
So sweet, loved it!
1477166 chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Beautiful :') I love that you're still adding chapters on!
International08 chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Oh man. Twisting my heart, but it's so good. Love it, chica!
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