I like this.

I almost cried after reading this. Poor Satori. Did Koishi die in an accident and Satori is deluding that she's still alive? Or is she literally an imaginary friend that nobody else can see and-just like in SA-Satori's the only one who acknowledges Koishi's existence?

Cute interaction of Alice and Marisa. Also, who's "She" who keeps getting capitalized? Mima? Shinki?

Lol, I found this thing thanks to Touhou WMG. Great job though.

Interesting story, I dropped here by TVTropes, and I also have a theory like this, but it's that everything happens in Reimu's head when she's playing with her dolls, less dark, but your story is interesting, keep going!

Man that's great.
But if this is a downhill story, well, we need to go deeper.

Wow, I thought this fic was dead, so I was surprised when I saw it updated...

Anyway, it's wonderful. Your writing conveys very well the characters' thoughts, their personality and their personal insanities in only a few lines. It was also very realistic... I hope you will continue writing this.

I as well have read the WMG on TvTropes, and followed the link. This definitely has potential, and I hope you'll write more focusing on different characters. Nice job!

As the troper who put up the first version of the WMG ages ago, I'm very impressed. I'd love to see more of this from you!

Oh dear me, it seems that I have come across that WMG and informed my friend about it to make it into a fanfiction. Seriously, I was not expecting this to come out of no where, but neverthless it's very good start.

My friend is going to be pissed, hehehe, oh well, sucks to be her. Anyway, I agree with the below.

You now have the responsibility to finish this to the very end.

I'll be expecting more in the future.

Goodluck!

Oh you got to be kidding me? Really? I mean... Wow.

I've read that WMG and yes I also think the Gensokyo is a Mental Hospital thing is a just a rich story to write!

Friend, you now have a responsibility to finish this epic!

Go on I'll be cheering for you! XD