Thanks for sharing this with us.

I don't normally leave many reviews but I just had to chime in and tell you that I think you are a very talented writer. I absolutely love this story so far!

Love this very much

nice story, I enjoyed reading it

This is just something I found a little funny while I was reading, I'm from the south and while reading Jasper's dialogue I found myself replacing certain words with "more southern" alternatives. A good example was in one sentence "You've got yourself a southern cowboy now and I want a woman who isn't afraid to be herself." and without realizing it I replaced "isn't" with "a'int".

love your authors note giggles great story so far

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oh god, not Bree again? please no. i picture that girl in the movie and she's just to young and to unattractive.

i hope it's a boy, my great uncle was named Emmett!

I love it! So there! Made me laugh at your super mature authors note. If anyone complains just say Fanfiction bitches!

Archiveofourown seems to be more open. I hate to say it but fanfiction seems to be very prejudiced against heterosexual intimacy. If it's gay sex they have no problem. These are, however, the same complete idiots who threw one of the most loved and long lived stories (Harry Potter and the Nightmares of Futures Past) off of the site for having "proprietary lyrics" the only lyrics in that story are for the second year sorting song which had to be original because Harry missed the sorting second year as he was being beat up by the whomping willow. Well the car got beat. Anyway, they've been told, probably hundreds of times. Is the story back? No.

Nice, tender and semi-normal birth, though i would've like to see their relationship expand those months of waiting? seemed extreme i mean she fell in love with Eddy within days and she gave the cold shoulder to Jasper like months? i get it first love and stuff but Jasper is her soulmate, someone who just get you, she would have fallen in love faster with him plus with the pull on the way...come on! other than that it was great! thanks!

I am curious as to why she didn’t start the change when jasper bit her

Hey, you need to credit your song lyrics or take them out because the fiction Nazis pulled one of the most popular fics ever over song lyrics. I think it's okay as long as you note the artist.

So sweet! Gotta love Rascal Flats. if they never did another song they'd still be awesome. Jasper has a silver tongue in this story, that was the perfect thing to say.