Reviews for The Journey Begins
flyboy38 chapter 31 . 3/21
After reading these last few chapters one has to wonder if you are slightly prophetic with the current pandemic causing places the world over to go in to quarantine.

I am surprised that you don’t have some of the muggleborns to bring up feeding via IVs as well as administering potions the same way to get past the upset stomach and foul tasting potions issues. This subject hit close to home because I had an issue over being unable to get enough food down to maintain my weight. So they stuck a very large IV in me and I then had to be hooked up to a machine for about 12 hours a day to pump all of the nutrients in to me that my body needed to regain my weight.

I am curious to know if you have already completed most of the next chapter and to see if you had anymore parallels with how things are currently going on in the real world.

Looking forward to the next chapter;

Signing off from ground zero of COVID19 in the US.
Lady Kaiki chapter 31 . 9/25/2019
Love it !
Guest chapter 11 . 9/23/2019
Wow an interesting story I love it. I will continue reading it then review again!

Guest 2.0
Duo-Harmony-in-the-Dark chapter 1 . 9/22/2019
This book is really well written. Please don't listen to reviewers like smokeapound. They are just jealous that they can't write as well and they won't know a well written book even if bit them. Never take what reviews like say to heart.
buterflypuss chapter 31 . 9/22/2019
Good chap
smokeapound chapter 1 . 9/22/2019
I would like to call this a piece of shit but that would be too nice take your fingers out of your asshole and the dick out of your hand and then maybe you'll be able to ask you to write a piece of shit story
DarkRavie chapter 31 . 9/22/2019
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
RHatch89 chapter 31 . 9/22/2019
Awesome update :)
geetac chapter 31 . 9/22/2019
I liked the chapter but it was confusing with what person is involved with each other. I hope Nigel gets better soon
kaizademeraude chapter 30 . 9/8/2019
When are you going to write the next chapter?
littlespite chapter 30 . 6/15/2019
Great story so far. But where's the rest of it? I read all the other stories on this type and find most are not complete.
Harry Everdeen chapter 30 . 5/19/2019
I am loving this story! I hope you will continue to update it. If you are not though can you please let me know?
Property.of.a.DeadGirl4-25 chapter 30 . 5/16/2019
OMG OMG OMG
Badger's Den chapter 26 . 1/11/2019
Just thought I'd say what a wonderful story this, the attention to detail and general plot had me as hooked as a full blown novel. Once I'm done with this, which I hope you'll carry on when and if you can, I'm going go binge read knights of the founders. Great reading either way!
Zale potter chapter 22 . 10/2/2018
I know I am late but here is what I would have I would like to see Minerva stay on as head of the school. As for changes maybe she would bring back some of the classes Dumbledore took off classes that the pure bloods would like thus making her seem more better than they thought.I also would have her change the professor that teaches muggle study to some one who knows more of the Muggle world help those who take it get an even better understanding of that side of the good chapter as always i really enjoy each new chapter.
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