| Reviews for Breaking the Cycle |
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RailRescue Force chapter 14 . 2/29 AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! YOU FINALLY UPDATED! I'm so happy. This story is one that I love so much. I've always wanted them to have a same sex couple in power rangers at some point. I think you focusing the story on an original character and bringing the rangers into the story alongside Zayden. This is honestly one of my favorite stories on this site. I do want to ask though, is there plans for a Rocky/Zayden/Wes three-way in the future? |
Olivarry8669 chapter 13 . 10/26/2018 I love it and love how you brought it all together hopefully you’re update soon I can’t wait for more |
Olivarry8669 chapter 11 . 10/26/2018 I love it and I love how you used the the white ranger and the thunder Zord powers early and love how you’re throwing the movie into the story |
Azurez chapter 13 . 8/1/2018 Long time no review! But let's jump straight into the heap of things I do enjoy the fact that you managed to bring the originals back together and allowing them to gain their Ninjetti Powers, and the fact they're still bouncing off one another; though I do wonder if this will be the case when or if Katherine shows up and decides to shake things up? On the other hand, I do feel that the flow of the dialogue and the interactions could be better handled? It's not bad but it kinda seems that you're "telling rather than showing" us everything and going too fast with certain things? That said I would like to see the other characters interacting with each other separately; like ex; Billy and Kimberly talking, or Jason and Tommy chatting, etc... giving them more characterization outside of them being with their lovers and expanding the doubts, uncertainties and such with people that they trust within the group. That aside when you brought up Rocky's brothers being Carlos... were you referring to Carlos from Turbo/In Space or is just a coincidence? Looking forward to seeing the next update! Sincerely, Azurez |
ladyTpower chapter 13 . 6/27/2018 i hope you will continue this story someday. it is amazing |
Quidcoxipzxyr chapter 3 . 4/14/2018 I just discovered your story and I really like it a lot I can’t wait to what happens next as I’ve only read 3 chapters. I hope you update it soon and I hope Wes comes back into the story. I really like Zaidan’s character too. |
guyrusher1 chapter 13 . 2/24/2018 I love this story so much. The character development for Zayden as well as the balance of chemistry he has between Rocky and Wes is just so fun to imagine. Just a personal request for a future chapter, if during his training with Udonna Zayden accidentally sends himself into the future during th SPD series and has a run in with Sky that ends in the bedroom or even sends himself to the RPM dimension and he has a quick hook up with Dillon from that series these would be dreams come true if it happens, plus it would throw a wrench in Zayden and Rockys current relationship. |
davycrockett100 chapter 13 . 12/6/2017 sweet |
white collar black wolf chapter 13 . 12/5/2017 Liked it can’t wait to read more |
MattKennedy chapter 13 . 12/5/2017 Rocky's adorable. :) Yay for the Rangers passing the Trials and gaining The Great Power. |
MattKennedy chapter 12 . 1/2/2017 So I was a bit hesitant to read this story, just because I haven't read any Power Rangers fanfiction before, but I really like your others so I decided to try it out and am very glad I did. :D It's been really interesting so far and I really like Zaidan. Though poor him at having to tell such private info to everyone and not just Rocky. Here's my vote for Rocky decking the mysterious hooded figure in defense of his boyfriend. :) I'm also very much looking forward to the future when they meet the 12th (currently evil) Ranger as I have an idea of how it is and am very interested in finding out if I'm right. |
MattKennedy chapter 8 . 1/2/2017 Love the idea of Rocky's little brothers knowing his 'secret' (and how they found out). :) |
JJFicFreak chapter 12 . 12/16/2016 Always love seeing a new chapter, and Definitely wouldn't have guessed Zaidan would be double dicked but a nice feature, any chance Ivan Ooze would make an appearance, out of that entire movie he was the best |
JJFicFreak chapter 11 . 10/20/2016 Always happy to see this story still going, considering Ivan Ooze was the bad guy originally you've done wonders with Zedd, can't wait for the next chapter |
Olivarry8669 chapter 10 . 10/6/2016 I love the stroy it's awesome I hope you add to it very soon |