Fuck you asshole. Hey, your mother was a worthless fuckrag. Hope you kill yourself.

please update

I love this story! I hope you won't abandon this story, it has a lot of potential

Le truc s'est que ni Naruto ni sa mère étaient des ninjas de konoha donc pas de livre de bingo quand il apprendra que ses sœurs sont en vie cela va aller mal.

I must say i honest enjoyed these two chapters, hopefully we'll see you here again one day, till then Ta-Ta :D

how dare u abandon this fic

Great chapter.

this fic has totally been abandoned now im just waiting for someone to adopt it regardless of what the author says

i can barely wait for more chapters... i like where this story is going so far... though honestly i have only seen naruto use one jutsu so far in the story... i hope to see more than just the taju kage bunshin explosion technique.

when is the next chapter coming out don't leave us waiting

Dude, you need to get your shit together and write another chapter cuz this is gold. It'd make me and definitely a lot of people happy.

Hold bricks. aim brick.

waiting for target to update

Ah, damn. The good authors always drop the excellent stories in favor of more fruitful pursuits.

Came for kinky smut, stayed for solid writing. Nora Uzumaki and her overly attached son Mr. Maelstrom are compelling, and make me wonder why one children's cartoon can turn out Heart of Ice and another turns out 600 Billion Explosive Tags.

Sooo, is this going to get an update? I really like the premise and what you are doing with it, so I hope that it continues at some point, but I totally understand if you can't/won't keep it up. Thanks for what is here, and the people you have likely inspired to give me more awesome reading material!

Excellent story i really hope to see more updates for this