sappy is awesome!

BRAVO-BRAVO, "I'm Garrus Vakarian and this is now my favorite Mass Effect ending on the Citidel!"
You nailed Javik's character, your writing was like artist elkor artist Forta... Sublime. I love this story and if there's going to be a spin off, or add-on, I am there.
Good Job. Where were you when Bioware was choking on their bullsh** ending? Best believe I'm following you!

That we do! Simple, sweet, loved it. You made me smile.

Also loved the note about how the reapers done effed up because they were too focused in like a laser on Shep- the rest of the galaxy had a lot to offer as well.

DAMN IT YOU BITCHES DON'T TAKE HIS SHEPARD AWAY!

*breathes* Augh, just... auuuuuuuugh ;_;

AWESOME take on the ending, nice closure!

Kudos for going with the indoctrination theory (the basis for the whole fic I'm writing, actually); it's nice to see an ending that makes sense filter into fan-fics!

Why oh why couldn't we have had an ending like this? You have an often poetic style and a flair for description. Wonderful, clear writing and great sense of mood. I really enjoyed this.

The Javik part was the best, great job on this little story ~.

Yes indeed, we need some sap. Some fluff. Some corn. That's why I keep coming back here. :-)

I don't mind the sappiness at all! I like the way Javik explains that her failure wasn't a failure at all. Nice work.

Another good chapter. Nice work.

oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh... why can't this be part of the ending? It would make so much more sense (thus far)instead of that crap ending Bioware gave us... *sigh* anyway, It was awesome! I am really exited for your next chapter. Hell, I get excited for all your stories XD Keep up the awesome work!

Very well done. More please.

That was... intense. I almost started crying! The ending was so... you know, if ME3 would've ended like this, I'm sure a lot more people would've been MUCH less pissed! xD Anyway, I loved it, (if you couldn't already tell), can't wait for a second part if you chose to make one.

How is it that every single piece of fan fiction no matter how long or well written, that deals with the ending, is better than the original? (well except for the ones that insult your intelligence and start out by telling that they can't POSSIBLY imagine what all the complaining is about and try to keep the endings the same while just expanding on them, those ones are awful)