This is fantastic. Maybe it's just been a while since I saw The Big Bang, but I don't think I even truly understood what a world with no stars meant for everyone else.
Jack doesn't know where he's from. Sarah Jane used to travel, but also didn't. Nobody's life made sense.
Great job capturing all of it!

Excellent

Two thousand years is a long time and you've seemed to have filled them nicely. Great story! My favorite part was the last chapter where you showed how much better life is with starlight shining down on all of us. Couldn't agree with you more.

Very cool story. Rory's encounters with the other companions were interesting and the side stories were touching.

This is really good :) I don't claim to be an English expert but this is really good writing... Xxxx

That was just great!