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This was great! You could really put yourself in Rains shoes

You are very welcome! I enjoyed this story, and I was wondering what name you were planning on re-uploading it under? I hope you decide to write more for this fandom when time allows you! :)

Aw, you're welcome! I'm glad that you found my reviews helpful, and I have to say that I enjoyed this epilogue. :) This has been a good story, and I love how you wrote Rain's personality! I hope that you decide to write more for this fandom, so please keep up the good work! .

Watching more Disney movies, always a good decision. :) So, Mana's mom was immune to the disease, or what Mana had wasn't contagious? Either explanation works for me! I look forward to the epilogue, because I'm wondering if you're going to include Machika or go a different route with it. Please keep up the great work and update soon!

Okay, that was purposefully vague. Nya! :P I have a feeling I was right about Mana having the plague, wasn't I? And for some reason, I have the mental image of Rain with braided hair in my mind...any chance of you working that into an epilogue or something? In honor of my epicness? . LOL! Oh, and here you go! *Hands 101 a bag of virtual potato chips* Enjoy! XP Anyway, please keep up the great work and update soon!

Yes, I know I'm awesome, but thank you for saying so! :D Well that explains things a little bit. Poor Mana's got the sickness, doesn't she? *Sniffle* I loved the mental image of Rain tumbling down a hill and landing in a lake, it just seems like something that would actually happen to him. :P LOL! This chapter is better written than the last one, so I hope you keep up the great work and update soon! :)

LOL, your welcome! Be sure to put ketchup on the corndog! XP This chapter was pretty good, still a little rushed, but definitely an improvement over the first chapter! I really liked this chapter, so please keep up the good work and update soon!

...*Tosses a corndog to 101* How's that? :P LOL! I'm enjoying this story, even though I think it's a little abrupt. There aren't a lot of details, but I'm hoping you'll get to those as the story moves along and you explain the characters a bit more. Like Rain, I'm also curious as to why Mana won't be claiming her title so please update soon!