Reviews for The Surrogate
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
When you have the emotional depth of a teaspoon, it's good to find a friend who's a bucket.
nightkitty555 chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
that's really, really cute.
lilypotters chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Love it. and the last sentence haha
Toaofwriting chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Aw, I really like this, it's great :)
mettigel chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Awesome fic! I really love Luna in this one.

"And I think she knew who she really wanted to thank."

Awesome!
Howlcastle chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Really charming. I love how very, very perceptive and yet utterly strange Luna is in this. Her and Ron are polar opposites in a lot of ways, which is rather fun.
Ronny Weasley 3 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This should be rated M for swearing...!
bballgurl119 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
I really liked this story and I'm always impressed with your writing skills. However, I would like to suggest changing the rating from K to T only because of the swearing. Anyway, good job and continue writing.
peacock33 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
These little shots are always nice to see that Ron wasn't a complete jerk and actually still cared for HErmione. But the problem always seems to be how to reconcile these nice feelings, gestures, and epiphanies with the fact that he stays with Lavender for another few months and isn't always pushing her away until after his poisoning. So it would be interesting to see how someone addresses that, which is why I like "The Waiting Place." Hope you share some more great stories.
Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
This was excellent. I think you did a really excellent job with Ron's feelings during HBP. You kind of summed up Ron and Hermione's relationship perfectly. And Luna was absolutely perfect. You wrote her spot on. And you were good at using her as a medium for Ron's confused thoughts/emotions. I really enjoyed the dynamics of Ron and Luna's friendship as well. It's something we never get to see in the books and this is how I would picture it to be. Ron talking about his jumbled emotions and thoughts and Luna putting them into perspective for him.
harrys-girl-4-life chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Wow, that was a really cool concept, and you executed it beautifully!
HawthornBlood141 chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
You seriously write those characters so well. I want to cling to your stories and never let go.
regbride12 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
This was an interesting spin-Luna taking care of things...I can picture Luna-"Hermione, Ron has Wrackspurts in his head but he loves you" good ole Luna right ;) btw in my own lil world, Lav Lav never existed ;)

Again love your stories! :)
jesrod82 chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
This was a great insight into Ron's feelings towards Hermione at this point in HBP. But besides that I think you did Luna particularly well.

/"don't you think maybe those two things are actually the same thing?"

So clever! Most people write Luna as being dreamy and a bit off, which she is, but rarely does one write her as wise. Luna has the ability to see what others refuse to, and has no problem saying it because she honestly believes that she's helping. And in this case she really did.

What she said about her playing him and how Hermione thanked him through her... ah, I wish I could read that conversation! :)

Great job all around!
GingerPygmy99 chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
aw this was a lovely fic ! you have such brilliant ideas and i loved how torn up ron was over hermione crying, i can imagine him really being like that :'( luna does make me laff shes so funny :D

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