Very well done! Your writing makes this a treat to read, and the story flows so well! From what I saw, you have kept everybody well in character, and your dialogue is so fun to read :)
Look forward to more! Kudos!

I don't know why you criticism yourself so much - don't! It, honestly, makes it seem like your begging for readers... Really, many people don't like that. I don't care as much, generally, but I wanted to tell you that to help you out, not hurt your feelings.
As for the story itself? Awesome so far! XD I do hope you continue it soon, as I don't often find Starscream, Skywarp, and Thundercracker Prime fics. Plus, you have Knockout! :D

Btw, loving the Steve reference! x3 ...Though it's saddening to see him offline... :(

i love your story 3
i hope it won't be forgotten it would be such a shame! .

lg Reika

:D

please continue

cant wait for more, i think your megatron is fine doesnt seem ooc to me

yay ST-3V3 I love this guy

surely they could present it to megs like this, you kill screamer you also loose 2 more officers-competent ones-also they may be able to keep him in line

yay for excitement, poor lazerbeak

dundundaaaaaaaaaaa dramatic cliffhanger. Dunno what your talking about you are a good fic writer

yay KO, sneaky mech

i dont suck its awesome

I really love this. Despite all his faults, Starscream's care for his trine mates and even the rest of the seekers is what makes him a better leader than megatron

STEVE! yay

Ah, Skywarp. Ever the smart aleck. I like how you write him.

Seems like thing keep getting more difficult for all of them, though.