That was vary good you wrote this story with alot of emotion in it and you even gave closure to Talis father good job and great story.

Keelah Se'lai

Nice story. You caugth the atmoshpere rigth. Talking about Shepard's past for the first time.

This was really sweet. I guess it was too much to ask for from Bioware but you did a good job with what we should have gotten.

Really nice short story. Looking forward to seeing more work from you :D.

Very sweet. Nice work.

This is such a beautiful short story :) I love the scene, can picture it so clearly in my head, and what they are saying 3

i liek

NICE. Bazzag. Just got reading your story. That was very sentimental. Who knew such a short story could have such a huge impact! Very good dialogue. Excellent description of scenery. I could practically hear them talk. The little history was a nice touch, EXCELLENT!

Really nice story :)

A few mistakes but overall really sweet.