| Reviews for Fire Fist Harry |
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   Nikkless chapter 13 . 7/1 hope you will continue this |
| Nikkless chapter 6 . 7/1 really hope that Ace will use magic in this story |
| Nikkless chapter 5 . 7/1 hoped that he would get a different wand |
| Nikkless chapter 3 . 7/1 you mixed Hagrid and Vernons name in this chapter |
| Nikkless chapter 1 . 7/1 ch2 And its Portgas D. Ace not Portgaz |
| Nikkless chapter 2 . 7/1 idea is good but this needs to be proofread and fixed. feel like im reading a google translated text |
| Nikkless chapter 2 . 7/1 needs editing |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/19 why is there so much bold |
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/20 Nooooooooo There aren’t anymore chapters :/ great fanfic |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/19 Hoping he doesn’t end up back in one piece world until the end of the story and hope he doesn’t tell people he’s from another world but story is amazing so far! Have been loving it |
| AestasWinter chapter 13 . 5/15 Okay so I carried on reading after I read some of the reviews for the later chapters and have to say, this is A LOT better. It improved massively, this to me is mainly when you started to act write your own plot and introduce all these other characters. Not following canon and diverging has increased the story massively. Another thing I like is how you have got ridden of the scar, it never made much sense of why in all the other stories they always kept it. It's nice to see that its gone. Hopefully, we will see a massive boost in his magical abilities. I feel these should just be secondary thou, maybe get him to major in seals and runes. Enchanting etc. With his haki and fire abilities, extra atk is not needed. However, with the enchantments, he can make his clothes unbreakable add stuff to his clothes etc maybe even engrain some onto his body that melds into his fire body increasing its potency. He could even add stuff to his feet so he can fly. Not just this thou, he can maybe his ship/home secure etc. I feel this path is always underestimated in these fics. |
| AestasWinter chapter 7 . 5/15 dropping. All you are doing is following canon but adding details of not liking certain ppl etc and acting more mature. However, he never acts on anything as you are just making him follow canon. It's kind pathetic and annoying af |
| AestasWinter chapter 5 . 5/15 Hope he leaves ron and the girl. Find some new friends than just follow canon... |
| AestasWinter chapter 4 . 5/15 ngl hagrid low key is annoying af in this... not letting him buy his own things like right mate let him do what he wants with his money, as long as its not dangerous. Plus the main thing I don't like is how he doesnt explain anything |
| Tutubui7 chapter 13 . 4/9 It's an amazing crossover ! Ace is so polit and so generous with his friends and family. He is the one of the best person ever. Also he is badass and he starts little by little to change people around him. Hope you keep update ! |
