Wow. This was fantastic.

The story wasn't bad. But Adam isn't their brother for me - they have the same dad, that's all. A brother is someone you have in heart, because he made his way there, not just some blood - and most of all this Adam character doesn't fit in this show, I so dislike it

I knew I'd see Dean eventually in this fic, but when it happened, I jumped and gasped a little louder than I expected...and then you threw that ending at me! D':

That was beautiful... *sniffles* Damn it all..

Oh my... Holy hell that was GREAT!.. TWISTED.. SCARY and REAL.. So very, VERY GOOD! Bravo, *Gives standing ovation* Bravo!

That was just freaking heart-wrenching! Haven't you considered a sequel? It would be AWESOME! Really, brilliant job!

I see what you did here. The devil's mind tricks could certainly make Sam do something like this. Cool premise.

Nicely done. You legitimately had me wondering if he was in Hell or not, seeing Adam or not. My only clue was Adam calling him Sammy, which we know he wasn't familiar enough with him to do. But I wasn't sure and that's how it should be. I read a similar story on LiveJoornal that showed Dean's time in Hell and it's nice to get Sam's version too, even if it was a hallucination.

You've got good dialogue and description. I am also one to get annoyed by a lot of misspelling, misplaced punctuation and bad grammar. You avoided that so I say kudos and thank you for that.

I'm new here so I'm just perusing the site at the moment and so far, after having taken a peek at a few stories, yours was the first really good one that I wanted to read from start to finish. Great job.

All I can say is WOW! Would love to read the patch up of Dean

Awesome. This was really great. Really, really great. Sam's confusion is really believable. I could see this happening.

Great story about Sam's hallucinations.