Hands down, the best fanfic I’ve ever read. This inspired me to start writing. This may be one of my favorite works of fiction. The complex plot, the humor, the way the author perfectly portrays each character. Also, no joke, a fanfic has one of my favorite Batman fights.

Batman vs Black Adam is one of the best fight scenes I have had the pleasure of experiencing.

Thank you, Clcman for this amazing story.

That first paragraph makes Conner sound like the Hulk. Lol!

Imma gon take a guess. It’s totes probs not Zatanna cuz she's down and unconscious. I have no reason to suspect Robin, Superboy, Aqualad, or Roy. Roy fought Arty and Supey seems out of the loop what with his missing sheilds. Also Aqualad seemed genuine in the Manta situation... Rob is my baby so NO WAY.
Artimes and Meg'ann is my bet so far! Meg was being suspiciously guilty earlier. If i paid more attention and used the a/n in the first chappie I'd probably know more...

Heckk whyyy my Zatannaaa

Ha great chapter!

thank you for the advice you give it will really help me with my stories

So Manta! Well he might have been even more evil to Kaldur, who knows? Good job though

Well. That author's note is retroactively in poor taste.

OMG SO GOOD! took me two days and u already posted this a while ago so i didn't know if i should review or not earlier but i wanted to say that this story was awesome! It is not only the LONGEST story i've read but also the first Young Justice one. I'm still looking for a "Team members captured and hurt" story that is floating around in my mind but this story will do. Any other story recommendations/story writing tips? (i cant describe a scene for the life of me so that type of advice would be the most appreciated)

Sorry but I have to point out that Robin was born in Romania and Wallys parents live in blue valley so I'm pretty sure he would have been born there. Still a great story thought! :)

Oouuh, badass!

If you kill Wally, I will look for you, I will find you...

AND I WILL KILL YOU!

THIS WAS INCREDIBLE! OMF.

Best. YJ. Fic. EVER.

You said you made up Zatanna's birthplace and I'm not entirely sure but I think she was born in LA. I know that she traveled around the US with her dad a lot, as their cover is a traveling (and pretty famous) magic show. Gotta love B:TAS!

Very interesting story! I was very amused whenever Rocket was involved because:

Your Rocket: terrified of Batman, wants to make a good first impression.
Canon Rocket: Threatens Batman the first time she meets him. Taunts him. Insults his costume and cape.

Your Rocket: A lil worried being on the Team, scared of Boy Wonder yelling at her,
Canon Rocket: Hella overconfident in her abilities. Thinks she's some hot shit. Trusts her belt to protect her from literally everything except fire or electricity.

But either way, I enjoyed spending my night reading this story (on a night before I work, fml. Look what you've done). I look forward to checking out Madhouse!~