Can you make some more Naruto with a female Haku? It is my absolute favorite pairing but nobody seems to do that thanks.

This is still Shiken; The super st*pid, idi*t who accidentally submitted the wrong review. *facepalm* I'm sorry again for my stupidity.

Looks like my review cannot be deleted at all so I'm gonna give a review through here! （ω三ω）

I really like how you had written this one set in the supposed to be 'ending' of Naruto. Naruto killed Tobi, eh? Isn't that awesome? :D Moreover, how these events finally led to Haku and Naruto's recollection of Haku is just executed well... And... Naruto still have his feelings for Haku... AFTER ALL THESE TIME? OWO Naruto, you awesome dude! (But Haku is dead here... T_T)

And the flashback part is just sooooooo CUUUTTTEEE! :DDD I like how in-character they are there for most of the time! :D

And the ending part was just so sad! Its not Naruto's fault that he is young back then! And... AND? NARUTO DIED? That's the thing that I didn't saw coming!

All in all, this is a good-written and reflective one-shot! Thanks for writing this! :DDDD

Great work on this one shot and I agree there in not enough fem Haku love for Naruto.

I for one seen a diffrent reason for the sexy justu that I like even more. He made it at first to find out what his mom would have look like since normal kids look like thier parents.

AWWWMMMYYYGOSHHH! (ﾉ*)ﾉ .。.:*・.。.:*・.。.:*・.。.:*・

I honestly don't have any idea on how I would express how much I fangirled and squealed over this! I don't know why but I really have indeed fangirled! So. Much.

And this is the first Yuri fanfic that had me fangirling and suealing... since only yaoi fics makes me fangirl and squeal... (now I guess before...)

And the whole first part of the fic, I was all like literally screaming, "Goooo! Hinata! Gooo Giiirll!" ()人()

The way you had just depicted Hinata here is just... so... SuperB... (Now, I think I need to widen my vocabulary to have a fine word to express whatever awesomeness I can always read on your fics!) I really, really, really like the way you had depicted her and how you had showed her finally being strong (through Sakura)! Hinata is just so surreal here and can be easily grasped by the readers and the whole emotional stuff which she fought of with strength is just so... vibrant and surrealist... And the way the world had crumbled in her is just so... delivered well... (O_O；)

But what really made me squeal and fangirl a lot is how she wanted to protect Sakura and keep their relationship... Everytime this story stumbles upon that I just can't hep but literally squeal! I don't really know if Hinata is the dominant one here, but I think she is..., and I think that made me fangirl over this... Seeing her becoming brave just for the person she loves really made me happy...

(Looks like I'm starting to prefer HinaSaku now over SakuHina... _ _)

And the whole Hinata getting jealous is just so... cool... Seeing Hinata like that is weirdly cool for me... it seems...

AND when her frustrations was finally let out is just so cool for me! (And the Ino stricking Hinata is just so like Ino! (O_O；))

Kudos to you! You really have depicted and played with Hinata'S character here so much that I am left but JUST be stunned! Now I think I'll be hoping that you would be writing another Hinakura or HinaSaku(Hina?)... because this one is just so amazing!

And I am so, so, so sorry for this long review... but I think I need to voice out how amazed I am with this!

オネガイ ( )/

PS. You've really made Hinata Rock here!

Sweet fic! You made very good points on why they would like each other too. For the record narufemhaku is one of my favorite pairings

so this is basically Howenhiem's death from fma brotherhood you know dieing at his loves grave

it was so very sweet. i like it.

I liked it :) short buy sweet don't like the fact that he died but it was a nice end. I also agree with what he made his sexy jutsu for the way the village treated him how else would he surviving. I like the pairing just as much as I like naruto harems so great job ()