This was pretty good. I think that if you had gotten into Nico's head a little more, it would have been better, because you just said exactly what happened in the actual book. A little more description, and more of Nico's thoughts, and this could be amazing. Good job, though. Keep writing!

Ookay but I thought that this was quite good :)

I dont support thalico. Thalia is way too old for nico. And nico never showed any sign he likes thalia. Who started thalico anyway?

By the way good job. I like it except for the small thalico parts

I hate It
-Isabella

Review! :D

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So cool! :D

Very good, Xion! :D

I wanted to read this through Nico's POV! Thank you so much, Xion!

Great job!

Pretty cool. :) Though my first glance at the title made me think of Nico with a sword between his eyes :/

Thanks For The Story.
I Really Liked That It Was From A Nico's
Point Of View Instead of Percy's
Especially Since Nico's My Favorite
Could You Do Thalia's POV Next
Thanks Again.

Nice job with this. You did well with Nico's POV.

-cindella204

This is really cool, can't wait for the next chapter! For some reason I'm really looking forward to Percy being injured, I want to know what the others saw... Hehe I know, I'm a terrible person!

The problem with your fic is that you don't really tell what Nico is thnking, you just wrote exactly what the characters said or did in the book.