Please don't tell me that you have abandoned this! You've got a real flair for writing and a real understanding of the characters. I know it's a little late but if you read this, please carry on the story!

I am greatly enjoying this story, but I'm disappointed to see it's not yet finished! I know it's been just under two years, but I would be delighted to see an update on this. Even if there is none, however, I'm favouriting this anyway! :D

I'm not sure if you're going to even read this but here goes... PLEASE CONTINUE! Soooooooooooo GOOD! I want to know what happens! I love this story AND NEED MORE

Hey, good story, I like how you put "Archie" in there. He reminds us all about Captain Haddock. At least he reminds me of him. Is Jacques the stowaway? After all, it is almost what he went into the past for.
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By Orangefur of all the Clans

I like the layout, I like the story, I LOVE the plot, and I'm very interested in knowing where it's going to end up. :D I'm just wondering why the Captain doesn't remember meeting Tintin in the past, but I'm sure you'll explain that as the story goes along. :D

So, please keep writing and I promise I'll keep reading! :D Thanks! Great story!

Wow I'm really loving this story. I love your version of young Archie! and his friendship with Tintin. It must be killing Tintin to have so much insight on his friend's future and not being able to say a word about it.

Can't wait to see where this leads. Get Tintin home ! Great story :D

I cannot tell you how much I am loving this story! :)

You've given me some of my very favourite things: amazing writing, time travel, time travel that involves one character meeting a past/future variant of another character, fantastic Tintin/Haddock bromance (although I'm cool with it if it turns to slash, too _).

So enjoying this and really looking forward to the next part! :)

I am not going to far if i say that this is one

of the best storys i have ever read on pages

like this!You describing is so impressive that

i feel like I am in your story by

characters fits 100% to the original, but still have

something new and timetravelling-idea

is pretty great too, and the three plots(present, past1, past2)

makes it very i am totally in love with archie:))

Please keep on writing this,because you done such a great job!

PS. Sorry if my english isnt quite perfect, but i am a german

girl and so english isnt my first because i

have a good translator( google:))i nearly understood everything

of your great text.

An ominous tone to that last sentence don't you think? I LOVED it. Wonderfully written as always!

Oh, good, I wasn't the only one a little skeptical about this new layout. I've been on this site for almost ten years (as pathetic as that sounds :P I've learned this website can have VERY good stories once in a while, this story being no exception), and thus I'm very used to the old design.

You don't know how much I'm enjoying this. Words can't even describe it.. I don't remember the last time I was this intrigued by a story. This is worth showing to Herge himself, that's how good I think it is. :) I love the way you set up each scene to serve its purpose in letting the reader know as much as he/she needs to, no matter where it's chronologically set. And I especially love the way you write the characters themselves. I've grown so attached to young Haddock I'm hoping Tintin takes him back to the future with him (which would obviously be weird but, heh, that's how much I love him now).

Amazing work. And take your time! Just be sure not to forget to update. :) I really REALLY want to know where this all goes.

Ok, this is one of my FAVOURITE fanfics so far! You have to have to have to update soon yeah?

Oh my god this is brilliant! I love love love love LOVE this! PLEEEEEEEAASE write more soon? Okay? Good!

Ooh! Every chapter makes this more and more interesting and complex! I can't wait for the next one. :)

Wow, what an AWESOME story! Not only have you woven such a terrific plot, but I like the chemistry [not meant in a romantic way, but there is a cute spark between them, there's no denying it...] between Tintin and young Haddock almost more than the canon version! *gasp!* I love how you write 'Archie' with more youthful vigour and a more amiable personality, and reading the dialogue shooting back and forth between him and Tintin is so much fun.

Everyone is perfectly in character, and I have really no criticism or suggestions to offer... just PLEASE update soon! :D I have to see what happens to Tintin!

P.S.- Haha, actually I really enjoyed Allan's accent... it was fun to read and imagine in my head! XD

I really love this. poor, dear, tintin. Lonely, he is so lonely... anyways, keep up the writing!