Reviews for Thou Shalt Not!
mooneysfate chapter 40 . 1/29
i'm enjoying this story greatly. i love the changes that aurelius and alaric have brought about! i'm hoping that dumbles dies at st. mungo. :) thanks for writting and sharing this story.
atymer chapter 40 . 12/27/2019
This is how a true Slytherin works. Moving in the background quietly, and throwing on just a dash of Griff bravery, prodigious Raven intellect and a drop, or two of Huff friendship and compassion. In the end the plan comes together!

Now what will life throw at these newly remade men?
Am I waiting for an epilogue or will a nasty surprise spring from St. Mungos?
tigerlily124 chapter 39 . 6/10/2019
Good chapter, thank you!
gpmum chapter 39 . 6/5/2019
Type your review here. When I began reading this story, I was simply looking for something different. I've always thought Snapes character was especially tragic and miserable and then died a meaningless death. You definitely exeeded my expectations with your "something different". Now I've caught up to chapter39 , I will definitely give you an O. I have enjoyed your take on these HP characters and look forward to more chapters.
yukino76 chapter 39 . 6/5/2019
Good update thanks
ThePhoenixandtheDragon chapter 39 . 6/4/2019
Outstanding, thank you for updating this storyline. I wonder if Muggle mind healing and/or a magical blood infusion from a Black outside Britain's inbred bloodlines could heal Bellatrix's mind from psychotic to only eccentric.
Dixie.f.9 chapter 38 . 5/27/2018
So a possible happy future for Eileen. Severus and Aurelius are healthy once again. Nymphadora is about to be born.
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 38 . 2/7/2018
Salazar's necklace...
Lily is Severus's sister... Fun.
Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck.
tigerlily124 chapter 38 . 9/9/2017
Very good chapter! Thanks!
yukino76 chapter 38 . 9/7/2017
EE if really it was so easy when your water broke i think all mother would be happy
ThePhoenixandtheDragon chapter 36 . 9/3/2017
A little confused about the magical effect of both Severuses blood adoptions but so happy both will recover.
tigerlily124 chapter 36 . 9/1/2017
Well done! Hopefully the "cure" works for both of them. Thanks for the chapter!
yukino76 chapter 36 . 9/1/2017
good update
ThePhoenixandtheDragon chapter 19 . 9/1/2017
That was the classiest description of horse manure I have ever read.
Calensul chapter 3 . 4/11/2017
Hi, I know this was published a long time ago, but still want to comment on some things.
I liked the first chapter a lot. However, in the second it was weird that the boys almost did't speak and accepted all information without question as the future self of one of them was talking to them.
In the third chapter you mention the wolfsbane potion claimed to cure lycanthropy for centuries, that is plainly wrong. It didn't claim that, and it was invented in the XX century. I am realising the AU label now, so I will give you that one.
In any case, I am enjoying this, especially the deepening in the wizarding world and lives.
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