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I really like this story, especially the chapters for Haqua, Tenri and Chihiro... though normally I'm not that fond of the last one, but you've written her chapter very well...

"Elsie wondered if Keima remembered their own" — does this assume that Elsie and Keima kissed? That's the first I heard of it, so an explanation would be appreciated...

And I wouldn't really mind if you were to continue this story and include chapters for other girls, as unlikely as it seems. :)

Do Ayumi or another Haqua please, there my favorite charecters.

hey i liked it keep up the good work! i wonder...will there ever be a route for mari? there was that tease from the manga...

hey when did elsie and keima kiss? i dont remember also could you point me to some good elsiexkeima fics? harem is fine too after all its TWGOK keep up the good work!

I love every story you made! Especially Tenri's and Chihiro's andbthe interaction of Keima and Mari was touching. Can you also make one for Ayumi and the other member of 2B pencil, I kinda forgot her name. She was always a side character, I think it's interesting to know what she feels about Keima's relationship with her friends...and what if she also likes him? Hehe

Hmm... Interesting! Do one for Kanon, which she and Keima enjoy spring under a Sakura tree!

I like your stories although it's just short story. I hope you can make story about Keima x Mari (not mom and son), sounds that was ridiculous lol.
And i hope you can write a story about Jun.

sorry for my bad english.

This is my favourite for the five. I loved this Keima X Tenri. It was a little... for adults, but i loved it.

I really hope you will write the one with Yui ! I'm waiting for it !

Wow. This is pure one-shot goodness...
You write well, great enough to get me feel the romance in all this. Too bad they're one-shots, though. As with some other review, I really want to know what happened next in the lives of the pairings. I guess that's all in the imagination of the reader... XD
So, this chapter was made as per request, eh?
It. Was. Epic!
Since I only knew that this was a request after I read it all, I was really impressed on you taking the effort in copying the lines during that part of Chihiro's "re-conquest" in the Goddess Arc. As I read this, I was given an impression that Keima was going after Chihiro fully, neglecting Ayumi in the process, especially during the line "For one moment the Capturing God lost sight of his goal. In a moment of weakness he forgot about even Kanon's condition. Instead he took in the sight of a beautiful girl."
I was like, "OMG OMG OMG, Keima, don't go over the flag no matter how much I and the other people into the pairing fanbase want you to!" XD
Then as I continue, I think, "Oh, hey, it's a better way to end her conquest than in the manga. Keima would've been wiser to use this tactic. Y'know how Chihiro interfered with the next events, right? XD
Aside from the minor grammar errors in this chapter and in the other chapters, this is great! It's a good thing you took the time to share this to us! XD
If this ever happened, how would Ayumi react? How would her conquest flow change? If you have the time, you could write on this to create a two-part one-shot on the best friends. IMO, if this happened, the conquest of Ayumi would be much, much shorter.
More power to your writing! I look forward to the other one-shots to come out as soon as possible! XD

AWESOME CHAPTER!

whoa, wasn't really expecting that

hehhehheh

slightly confused with this one

Nicely written.