Eh, I review on every chapter I read. What I want to see is the bones of the story, the plot of it, to get a minor improvement. It feels a little like you rushed the whole brother thing a little far, and you may need to give a better way for the Ash meets her deal. Also, Ben wouldn't show his powers to just ANYBODY. First, he would have to find out if they have powers of their own, or they want to kill him, or they want to help, or he needs to rescue them. Also, the portal idea would be good, but it seems like this is the first time she went through one.

Wow. Just, wow. By the way, whens Ben going to scan the Pokemon DNA, eh?

Wow. This story is getting dark. Needs some Ben jokes. And chili fries. Lots and lots of chili fries.

This story is good hmmm... what if ben got pokemon for his omnitrix and somehow ended up in the poke on world oh I know have as catch kami only to protect her have her be like pikachu and stay out of her pokeball or something or have ben's omnitrix make where he can use his aleians like pokemon