| Reviews for Maternity ward |
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Guest chapter 3 . 1/6/2016 Not one of these people would be acting this chill over rose being pregnant not even rose |
Finnicks lover3 chapter 5 . 9/24/2015 Please update |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/22/2014 You better update this soon because its 2014 so hurry up |
dimitriXroza100 chapter 5 . 7/15/2014 You should continue... |
aj davis chapter 5 . 1/26/2014 Dang that sucks wish you the best of luck with your school work |
Flame1213 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013 Hey, I really do not mean to be putting you down, or disrespect you, but I have some... Comments to make about your story. I have only read a small portion of the 1st chapter and things have already progressed tooo fast, most pregnant women do not feel the symptoms the DAY afterwards. The sperm still needs to travel up the cervix, pass the body defences and break through the eggs cell membrane to join nucleui. That would not happen within a mere 24 hours. Not only that, granted Rose is meant to be in hormonal unbalance, but Dimitri is acting very OOC. The whole passion of their relationship was sparked by the fact that it was forbidden. It is your fan-fiction, and of course you have creative free-run, yet at least set a warning that the story is set up with fanatical features and OOC. That all! As I stated before, please do not take this too harshly, and hate me for it, but I felt it best to convey what I felt and Maybe get an explaination/reply fro you :). Just remember; constructive criticism is always healthy for budding writers! |
Kayla2983 chapter 4 . 12/28/2012 oooooh cant wait 4 more |
Danilas-Girl chapter 4 . 12/10/2012 update, please. no seriously, if you don't update ASAP i'm gonna cry ;) |
DarkSunshine24 chapter 4 . 10/3/2012 Update soon please! |
Do'B chapter 4 . 10/2/2012 WOW...that went well, no Alberta threatening to fire dimitri, no Janine threatening to castrated dimitri and Tasha's only response was "go"...is this a good thing or a bad thing? if Tasha is a true friend to Dimitri understanding his love for Rose than this would be a good thing but if Tasha is pissed than i guess we can be expecting some drama? i am so happy that Dimitri is back with Rose as he will get to experience this pregnancy together with her and every thing else that comes with pregnancy. looking forward to the next chap. |
XxXLost-In-The-CrowdXxX chapter 4 . 10/2/2012 Update soon! :D |
XxXLost-In-The-CrowdXxX chapter 3 . 5/30/2012 Update soon! :) |
Kayla2983 chapter 3 . 5/30/2012 love it |
Do'B chapter 3 . 5/30/2012 i love the openess and the honesty in this story. rose is not hideing or keeping secrets from dimitri, im a little dissapointed that dimitri and rose both declared their love for one another but dimitri still left. tasha allowed dimitri to leave with no conciquence, i was expecting tasha to compell dimitri or to throw some kind of hissy fit. like adrian i hope that you give both tahsa and adrian a partner, they both deserve to have someone who can love them the way they deserve to be loved. perhaps adrian and tasha can love one another? hope you can update soon. |
loventherussian17 chapter 3 . 5/29/2012 Great chapter update soon |