Please update the story soon

Very interesting story! You should keep writing this! I want to know what happens with Nightmare/May and Drew.

I love this chappie!
It doesn't matter to me if you want to do long or short chapters. Its all about how many words it takes to get the point and story across in the chapter. It could hit the 5,000 mark or over ...or it could hit 3,000 mark or lower. Its all about how much it will take for the main point of the chapter to come.
I look forward to the 3rd chapter!

I can't wait for more! This is very interesting!

why did u edit this story

This was really cool! I like this better than the first written one! But when I got the update to my email, I got confused as to where Chapter 2 was...then of course I cross-referenced the last time I read this with how it is now... I can't wait for the Real chapter 2 Keep up the good work!

I'm glad I stumbled upon this story! It is great! I cannot wait to see what will happen in future chapters. :)

getting really good

This sounds awesome! Can't wait for girls' revenge! Although they'll probably forget after they here what happened... Nightmare reminds me of Petrel...

I like this story alot. But if you feel the need to do a rewrite, then it should be okay with me. But personally, I like this the way it is right now. I mean I love May stories, and this is the first one that has her like this, I mean its really orginal. This story had me thinking 'wow, this is really cool!' and I do wish that it could stay the way it is. but it is your story so if you see if fit to do a rewrite then I naturally have no say in weither or not I want you to change it. But like I said, I love this the way it is. And I will be egearally awaiting for the next installment, either a rewrite or a new chapter.
Also I found the idea of May being in relation to Paul absolutely priceless, I was like 'holy crackers!' You were able to have on the edge of my seat every chapter and as well as excited for the next one. When I read that May had orginally died but was resurrected, I was completely stunned. I was both exteremly happy she was alive again but also very curious on how she got hurt in the first place.
I really hope you complete this installment, I mean, I love the way you portraited May. I loved every chapter and hope you continue to work on this wonderful plot, story, character development, and awesomeness!

mehhh you're decision. Well I'm doing something like your story since you inspired it :DDD its ok. focus on your other stories first then.

Nice chapter! May is sooooo awsome! I loved her new pokemon 3 The fact that she is strong triples my joy I'm curious how she will meet with Drew alone. Eeeeek! Great story!
Btw, I bet you too get bored while writing "Ash, Paul, Misty, Leaf, Gary, Brock... were shocked" kinf of sentences. So why don't you try 'all of them' or 'the team' kind of phrases. That could help :)
Good work ;DDD

No, i absolutly hate it when authors rewrite an unfinnished story. So what if this one is crappy, write it out in full! Finish your story then use this one as your outline for the next. Rewrite it them delete this one, but dont rewrite it befor eyou finish this one otherwise there is no guarantee ithe rewrite will be better than the original.

You COULD rewrite it but it might take more of your time so it all depends on you

I think the story is fine as is. Of course there are things you would like to change, that's inevitable. But I think it's fine. Of course it's up to you in the end. Either way I'm sure that others will agree with me and say that this is a great story! Keep up the good work! You're awesome! Luv ya! Update soon! Or not! Whichever works for you! Have fun! Be happy! Save Money! Live Better! Walmart! Better ingredients! Better pizza! Papa Johns! *rambles on with a bunch of different commercials*