Oh. My. Gosh! I loved it! This was absolutely amazing! You did such a fantastic job, such an amazing Fast and Furious fanfiction!

Oh. My. Gosh! This was amazing! I absolutely loved it! You did such a fantastic job on this story! It made me cry and laugh! Great Fast and Furious fanfiction! I'll be sure to check out your other stories!

...How is it biologically feasible for a 13-weeks-along fetus to survive outside the mother? If there was a timeskip, we missed it. This is seriously ignoring the rules of reality.

Well, it was too unrealistic. For starters she is just too cheerful for somebody who's parents got killed just the day before and she was at the the house when it all happened. How Han and Roxy fell in love was really rushed, no chemistry, no interesting dialogues, only he is handsome, she is beautiful. Situation with Lettys' and Roxys' disappearance was really something, "we never wanted for you to be disappointed in us so we pretended we were dead, for several years" WTF?! It was illogical and way unrealistic, if you really killed Letty I would have understood why Roxy would have left but they both were alive. Anither thing is Roxy needs to grow up, her thing with Han and Rome in Rio, it was something. I totally agree with Han, not with slut thing, but you see girl is kissing the boy is sitting on his lap, he is stroking her leg, mentioned firl is saying we may hook up in future but it will be just sex, why are you jealous and don't like me relationship with Rome? Is she mental? If you wrote that Han was okay with it I would have tought he is crazy. Han also is way out of character. Han is smart, cunning, loyal, you wrote him as queen of drama. He is always panicked, can't make any normal decisions. Roxy is the girl who just stopped growing after 15 years and still thinks everything is about her. You should work on dialogues too, sonetimes it is hard to tell who is talking.
5/10

Love this story from beginning to end didn't stop reading for a moment

A few things come to mind when describing this story: Rushed. Unrealistic. Out of Character. Mary Sue!

Yes, Roxy is the epitome of a Mary Sue and an annoying one considering the world revolves around her. I mean it's understandable that she be the center of attention since the story is written about her, but this just takes it to a whole new level. The entire storyline is rushed through and coppy as well, but the most annoying part is how unrealistic and out of character the most basic of characters are. Han fall in love with her with a single glance (because she's gorgeous and though under aged, that somehow makes her better than all the models) and Roxy is crying over a guy she's know a whole week.

Overall the story is a cute read if you want something to blast through in a few hours, but it's not a quality read in the slightest. I wish you the best if luck in your future endeavors.

5/10 - Would Not Recommend

This was an amazing story. I was glad I was able to find it. Please write more Fast and the Furious fan fic.

What, is she not going to see them for like a decade or something?!

Sometimes it is hard to know who said what for example here is a quote from Roxy:

"Aren't I sleeping?" Vince shook his head sadly.

Roxy said that but you put Vince shook his head sadly right after and it confuses. Vince shaking his head sadly should not immediately be right after someone else talking.

Other than that, I enjoyed reading this story.

The story is okay but it is kind of hard to follow who is saying what at times. Also I'm sorry but I have to admit I'm not a big fan of Roxy. She's just too Mary Sueish for my taste. It seems like all she really brings to the team is drama she's either getting hurt/passing out or fighting with Han. I also didn't like how you had her accomplish feats that no one else on the team could do for example when they were practicing driving the cars Roxy was the only one who was not caught by the cameras.

Absolutely amazing story!

Just out of curiousity what is the rest of her presents?

Aww I LOVE LOVE LOVE the ending! So sweet!

Thank you for the shout out, it made me smile. I absolutely know you didn't mean anything, the timing was just ironic lol. This was a beautifully written story, each and every chapter. I can't wait to read more of your work.

:o i cant believe its over. i mean i remember when i first started to read this! thank you so much for writing this amazing story :) i cant wait to continue reading ur work

awwww :D thank god she is alive! XD