I think the first thing we can say is that they are both intriguing characters. I suppose their staring challenge will be considered as a electrifying beginning. It will allow them to reach out for each other. Good job for portraying this aspect of their characters.

Awww they're really cute together, normally they're good together but not like cute, if you get what I mean. (Bellatrix doesn't normally do cutesy, normally sadist love of sorts) You should continue it's a good story and I'm sure Ron could be dating that Ravenclaw girl.

Nice fanfic

Arthur & Molly weren't at Hogwarts at the same time as the Marauders & Lily...

of course I'm liking it! I see you haven't updated in a long time :'(
I really do hope you continue writing this story; it's beautiful and has so much potential!

Love this- please update!

I really like the story. the way you tell it, the speed of how the story progresses. i really hope you write another chapter, 'cause I'm dying to know how it continues.

I loved Ron's reaction! He was so supportive and cool. And I liked that Harry could see at the end just how much the girls love each other. I really hope you can update the story soon, because I'm in love with it haha Take Care :)

Bella is too cute :) I hope she can open up to Hermione and let her in ;) Take care. I love this story!

love this story. i really what to know what happens next

Love this- please update ASAP!

please update this, i LOVE this story!
Megan xxxx

i like this fan fiction when are you gona up date!

Great Chapter! I can't wait to read the next!

I'm quite enjoying this story. 'Mione x Bella is kinda my drug so it's always good when I run across another well put together one.