Reviews for Friendly Competition |
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bonnie lily-flower chapter 3 . 7/6/2016 It is quite surprising that the flight is deemed as succes with four people fighting in the forest and being in detention afterwards :D But all in all: great story! I had a lot of fun while reading. Thank you! |
DelfineNotPadfoot chapter 3 . 7/30/2013 Great fic! Could you maybe write the flying race between Lily and James? :D |
Hope's Mom chapter 3 . 3/11/2013 I have read some of your work on MNFF and was very happy to reread this cute piece of James/Lily fluff on this site. I look forward to reading more - thank you! |
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 3 . 3/7/2013 Another fab unique and funny and clever story |
MnM-Flurry chapter 3 . 5/30/2012 Good story. I really liked the ending. The story was deemed a success and read again the following day. |
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 3 . 5/20/2012 aww! Lovely lovely story! Really enjoyed reading it! :D |
FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 2 . 5/20/2012 HAHAHAHA What a mix-up! Lily asked Robert purely to improve her flying but HE thought that she was flirting! And Carin asked James to flirt but HE thought it was purely for flying! HAHAHAHA Anyways, liking the story so far :D |
Hermione Fowl chapter 3 . 4/19/2012 Loved it. It was amazing, and everyone was in character. The postscript was written exactly how a professional would write it. Alan Diggory, however, does not exist. Amos was Cedric's dad's name. I believe that was who you meant. Added to favorites. :) |
flawsmadebeautiful chapter 2 . 4/17/2012 You’re an incredible writer, I like it a lot. I like Lily and James a lot, even though James is a bit of an idiot (at first) and Lily’s a bit in denial (for a long time.) |
istolethecookie chapter 2 . 4/17/2012 I loved how Lily and James interacted with each other - very funny:) update soon! |
istolethecookie chapter 2 . 4/17/2012 I loved how Lily and James interacted with each other - very funny:) update soon! |
istolethecookie chapter 1 . 4/17/2012 Great start to the story! I loved it:) alright, I'm off to the next chapter... |